I’m liking the story so far. However, I do not understand the point of introducing the mc as a prosecutor in her past life if she’s gonna act all goofy and naive in the story. I haven’t read a part yet in the story where she acted like one?? Author could’ve just introduced her as another girl reincarnated, it would’ve been fine bro
no, yeah definitely. i remember seeing ppl raise this point too but everyone else was like "well you cannot expect her to be on 'work mode' even in the next life" and like ??? this is literally characterization 101. if you introduce a character as *this* in the past life, that should be the driving force of the character
it's not as if she's not smart. it just feels like her plans are not quite /it/. it feels weak, especially in the later chapters.
I think y'all are too damn autistic to be flexible. Cause so the fuck what if she isn't "acting accordingly to her past character sheet" there is nuance in every person and not everything is just black or white there is GRAY as well as every other color in the damn rainbow when it comes to people and how they DECIDE they want to act as well as the CIRCUMSTANCES and ENVIRONMENT that can influence the way someone could and would act differently.
Swear y'all always lose your mind when something isn't the way you want it to be and the truth of the matter is that it's not YOUR story so just suck it up and enjoy for what it is because it was written the way it was for a reason which your slow ass brains are too stubborn to be patient and ride it out til the end to find out about the reason. She is as she is. Her MIND her CHOICE. Live with it jeejus ( ̄へ ̄)
If anyone's bent out of shape here it's you dude. Yeah, some people can be unreasonable in comment sections, but when others expect a character detail an author wrote to factor in the story--that's not complaining. It's Chekov's freaking Gun. I agree with OP, you could literally replace FL's backstory with anything else and nothing would've changed. Hell, I also forgot she was supposed to be a lawyer.
I was a hooker in my past life but I'm a medical assistant in this one.... And in this life I don't act like a hooker nor did being a hooker in my past life affect the way I behave in this one. In my past life I was an extrovert with a bad attitude and in this life I'm an introvert who likes plants and likes studying stars for fun. Now that you know my life story which is the real me to you? The hooker or the medical assistant? Which one defines me more? The slut or the practitioner?
Do you see how stupid it sounds to even think you have a say in what I am when you wouldn't have known in the first place if I didn't tell you to begin with? Same thing with the author, if they didn't tell you she was lawyer in the first place IT WOULDN'T HAVE EVEN MATTERED because she is who she is NOW. Think of it as a little fun fact to know instead of a friggin certainty. Like for example my favorite color when I was a kid was purple but now it's amber, does it matter that my favorite color was purple? Nah it's just I decided it was a fun fact to know that use to be what represented me but not anymore. Swear you guys suck as deep thinkers. ಠ︵ಠ
Geez did someone piss in your cereal or something? It really isn’t this deep but you keep acting like your thoughts are so above ours, lol. At least you agreed the lawyer detail was pointless and doesn’t play a role in her new life. Really, from a writing standpoint, they should’ve just not mentioned the past life profession at all. Anyway, I’m done chitchatting with you. Peace.
THANK YOU. It’s NOT real life where a person can ignore stuff like that and do something completely different on a whim. This is a story that an author has to go out of their way to mention certain things. If it didn’t matter then why wrote it at all? The readers shouldn’t be mocked for expecting something out of that.
What got me to start commenting on this site at all was a little game to see how much of a crash out I could cause over the most innocuous statement. It was fun, but I started slipping and intentionally posting rage bait which was cheating so I stopped.
The average east Asian cartoon enjoyer will fly into hysterics over the smallest critique of something they enjoy. Not healthy.
are you like, 12? is this how you approach literature? is critical thinking dead? is literary criticism dead? just be saying a whole bunch of nothing. you're the type of reader who goes on to read shit and eat absolutely anything it dishes you out even if it's horrible
if you have nothing to contribute to a fuckass DISCUSSION then shut the fuck up
exactly. it is fair to rebut and say 'hey i don't agree with your point and (insert explaination and elaboration on why i think this way)' which would've made a FAIR and civil discussion regarding this. but not only are some people unable to stop themselves from devolving to insults, but the blatant ableism in the first line was so weird. like 'y'all are too damn autistic to be flexible', first of all, the insinuation that autistic people are too rigid and incorrigible to understand character nuance and development is such a weird hasty generalisation and assumption to make, especially when autism is a spectrum. it's also such an unnecessary and outrightly i sulting remark to make?? no where in the thread was autistic/neurodivergent people brought up or implied at. it was simply a discussion talking about the incongruity between the fl's current behaviour and her traits which were emphasised at when discussing her character as a reincarnated person. bringing up autistic people out of nowhere and in such an insulting remark is honestly so gross and disgusting, and honestly speaks alot about them as a person, combined with the fact they seem to liken themselves in an holier-than-thou way while insulting everyone involved when mind you, the discussion had been civil and peaceful beforehand.
The plot is nice but how they executed the story is not the best, it had potential to become great. Art is also not that good. Another thing, I found it weird that mc watched ml grow up. Even if ml isn’t technically a child, his physical body became one. Both of them are supernatural beings but I still find it kinda weird lol










well this is disappointing.. another bl that I would only read just for the smut i guess