It was a decent story but I think there are a few plot holes and some things that could have been explained better. In particular, we don't know enough about the female founder or how the stone was created. Some characters and their motivations could have been explored more. I think the story had an interesting concept, but it left too many questions unanswered.
Overall, I enjoyed it. The only thing is that everything happened a little too quickly. I wish we had gotten more background on the characters, and I would have liked to see Albert and Asha’s relationship develop more slowly.
I thought he might be a killer, but I never expected him to be a stalker and a rapist too. And the way he keeps getting away with it, bro... I just can't. He spewed some bullshit and then moved on to a new victim.
It was a decent story but I think there are a few plot holes and some things that could have been explained better. In particular, we don't know enough about the female founder or how the stone was created. Some characters and their motivations could have been explored more. I think the story had an interesting concept, but it left too many questions unanswered.