Bro, I would cry if my husband ruined my wedding for me like that. Wtf, time and place you freak :(
- fl not domming, we start out with her talking about how men being dominant makes her uncomfortable yet she suddenly flips as soon as soon as she meets the most annoyingly pushy second ml. It just falls into the "women are ment to be submissive" ideology. She is only used as a tool to make the ml comfortable, she tops him for a second before they fuck in piv missionary. They have her dom until he gains his confidence and now she's suddenly a bottom.
- second ml is a homewrecker, he wedges himself into their beautiful relationship with his own selfish intentions and doesn't give up even when both parties rejected him. He's a disrespectful prick who is passed off as a "puppy guy" so the readers wont think its creepy as hell. And he is finished off be saying that if they ever have problems in their relationship he's gonna date one of them, do they not get a choice?
- bad lgbtq rep, second ml is bisexual and I complained already. Maririn is nonbinary and says such insensitive things to the fl that makes her doubt their relationship and screams the ml's secrets across the bar. His ex was there too, leading to more problems.
- rapist ex, the ml's problems with confidence come from her bitchy and MEAN personality. She said he was bad at sex and his desire to be pegged was disgusting before breaking up with him and leaving him naked in a hotel. Then suddenly she reappears when he is finally happy, pushes him into seeing her and then tries to force him to have sex with her being the Dom. She forces him down and opens his shirt yet he still had to reject her with all the respect and kindness in the world. She leaves saying that "she wouldn't fuck him anyway" like a teen boy. And guess who comforts the rapist ex MARIRIN!
- everyone is mean to the ml, the second ml challenges him to his face, his girlfriend not only let's the second ml flirt with her but brings him on a date with them, maririn yells his secrets forcing him to run away from the bar, thats also how the rapist ex found him. My boy deserves a better story and a hug. (#－.－)
It turned into five lol
Its not terrible, but it's one of those "it's so hot when my boyfriend doesn't listen to me" type bls