This one is good. But I feel like...there’s no real conflict. Like an overarching story. Don’t get me wrong. I love smut. But this story has so much porn in EVERY chapter I became desensitized to it.
The Uke has such an odd personality. One minute he’s this badass fighting and being cold, and the next minute he’s blushing and twitching and cumming everywhere like a virgin, moaning and crying? He must have some sort of personality disorder to change so much when he’s horny. EVERY. SINGLE. TIME. He goes “no! Stop!” LIKE WE GET IT. STOP SAYING NO like that’s a personal thing I hate in yaoi. He’s literally the man you’re in love with and you’re saying “no! Stop it!” While rubbing your ass on his cock. (● ̄(エ) ̄●) He literally is enjoying himself but the “no please stop” while he’s drooling and cumming really takes from the atmosphere.
And the Seme... don’t get me started on his personality. So are you some psycho who kills people and only wants the uke for yourself? Or are you some horndog who cares for the uke and wants to take things slow? But oh, that won’t happen because, like I said, they fuck an average of 8 times every 10 chapters. And as good as that sounds, it starts getting boring VERY quickly.
Not to mention that when we DID get some sort of main conflict, it’s so vague, and barely mentioned.. Oh you know, the fact that he knows the MC from somewhere, and the fact that that’s mentioned once every 10 chapters. If that’s so important, why is it BARELY ADDRESSED 40 CHAPTERS IN?!. Anyhow, the art is great, but I’m going to drop this for now. It’s boring to me
Well If this manhwa isn't to your liking then Don't read it, Problem solved! If you had paid more attention to every details you would know why they suddenly acted that way instead of counting how many times they fucked. Not all of us came here to see them fucking but to read the Plot like me. And Spoiler alert the moment you stop reading from here on out is the moment alot of conflicts gonna happen.
Because I happen to read to raws and knows what's next.
Bye and dont come back :)
I'll have to agree with Fuggy here. Like how are we suppose to form our own opinions about a work and then decide to drop it or not when we haven't read it yet ya know? We don't know the plot yet or the manhwa in general until we've read it so it's hard to decide to drop or not read something at all based off the title or cover page. Which I'm not including something that looks like a love triangle where there's 3 ppl on the cover but I think you get where I'm coming from I hope.
This manga feels so rushed. I feel like it could discuss his trauma much more than what it has done. We went from him crying to his wife about his rape to him buying sex toys to put in his ass THE VERY NEXT CHAPTER. I cant be the only one who thinks this story is not paced well. I understand it’s a BL, but the MC Is supposedly straight, and he was raped for weeks by a man. And then the next time we see him he’s shoving things up his ass. As a sexual assault victim and one who has many friends who are the same, I feel like he wouldn’t have wanted to have sex so quickly or even be interested in other men immediately like that. In fact, he might even fear men who are interested in him, considering he’s straight right? Or if I’m getting it wrong and he IS gay, he would still be wary of others due to trauma. Also his personality did a 180. I’m just saying. It could have talked about his trauma waaaaay better than what it is doing. First impressions matter and even if it gets better, it’s certainly not starting off that way. Dropped.
Sometimes instead of becoming uncomfortable with sex, after sexual assault the victim becomes hypersexual as a way of coping. It's just one of those things. It happened to me :')
Sorry I meant to downvote, reason being that you misunderstood the pacing of this manhwa. If you looked and read a bit more throughly you will notice that there’s a a timeskip and flashbacks. Another being that you can’t really stand for all of the people that were sexually abused, assaulted, or raped. And the last being that “MC’s personality a 180” my issue with this comment was that the manhwa never showed how the MC was BEFORE the traumatic event. All we saw was that traumatic event and then how he is after.
there shouldnt be a timeskip about rape. Yall cant just use that as a tool in a story wihtout giving readers a time to process it. Thats my point. And duh i cant, however, thats how it is for the MAJORITY of us. The MC was RAPED AND KIDNAPPED. YALL GOTTA STOP ACTING LIKE THAT ISNT TRAUMATIC
THats true. However, this pacing is awful
Won't fight you on that one. You aren't wrong lol this pacing is wild
I feel like no matter what, readers should need time to comprehend something as traumatic as rape, and so should the MC. We see he has self help books, it would be great to see a scene where he’s buying them. Or better yet, reading them and crying because it hits too close to home. For him to go from being raped to immediately having sex like NOTHING happened is so weird to me. The time skip made no sense