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sun_bae November 6, 2019 4:11 pm

College application essays - they're tough right and I can never find a proofreader that focus on writing quality & story telling rather than just grammar like Grammarly premium?

I was thinking, would anyone be interested in an app that teaches you to write your essays tailored to your audience and goals? (e.g: Admissions, tell a story that showcases your strengths & weaknesses)

TIA for your thoughts!٩(。•‿•。)۶

    Amorim November 6, 2019 4:30 pm

    Ask an english teacher. It's what I did. I brought them to her and she basically told me what they wanted and how to get there.

    sun_bae November 6, 2019 4:55 pm
    Ask an english teacher. It's what I did. I brought them to her and she basically told me what they wanted and how to get there. Amorim

    yeah I know, I'm pretty good at essays myself but I'm wondering whether anyone would be interested and who didn't have access to a great English teacher. Would an idea like this help anyone out?

    mei November 6, 2019 5:06 pm

    yes please huhuhu im interested

    cheesecake November 6, 2019 8:29 pm

    that would be incredibly difficult since storytelling and overall quality is more holistic while grammar has set rules

sun_bae November 6, 2019 4:27 am

Like SM Gokko or Caste Heaven. Or anything like that of Harada, Psyche Delico, Ogawa Chise etc.

Basically, I want the seme to be sadistic as fuck. ^.^

    Anonymous November 6, 2019 4:41 am

    Everyone shits on Harada so much for being dark but honestly her work is art lol. You’ve probs read it but Ike Reibun is pretty good at that, Kobi no Kyoujin follows that a bit (although only for the first volume or so) There’s a pretty good thread about this on Baka Updates :) so you could reference that.

    sun_bae November 6, 2019 4:55 am
    Everyone shits on Harada so much for being dark but honestly her work is art lol. You’ve probs read it but Ike Reibun is pretty good at that, Kobi no Kyoujin follows that a bit (although only for the first vo... @Anonymous

    thanks! I'll check the thread out.
    I feel like there's a place for stories like Harada's - it is art like you said, maybe it's not for everyone but it's art all the same even if it makes you a little uncomfortable.
    So, I don't get the hate yo. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

    sun_bae November 6, 2019 7:59 am
    http://www.mangago.me/read-manga/mobius_strip/http://www.mangago.me/read-manga/if_you_tell_me_to_do_it_i_ll_do_it/http://www.mangago.me/read-manga/obey_me/http://www.mangago.me/read-manga/falling_alpha_enigma_t... Fantasy101

    Ah thanks, I've read like three here and I'll check the other two out.
    Obey me, lately, has been ridiculous. Almost cringey.

    Anonymous November 6, 2019 8:25 am

    Stigma. One of the guys who raped the uke smashed a whiskey glass on his back and he bled. That sadistic for ya?

    sun_bae November 6, 2019 8:53 am
    Stigma. One of the guys who raped the uke smashed a whiskey glass on his back and he bled. That sadistic for ya? @Anonymous

    yeah that one looks pretty good till date. Very Banana Fish but sadder? Idk yet. Hopefully he has a happy ending, he deserves it.

    sun_bae November 6, 2019 8:54 am
    There are a couple Gintama did she did that are amazingly sadistichttps://myreadingmanga.info/paraiso-harada-gintama-dj-yami-otoko-eng/https://myreadingmanga.info/paraiso-harada-gintama-dj-mienai-kusari-eng/ Blues_in_the_Night

    I'm ashamed to say that I've read them already lol. Thanks anyway! It's weird watching Gintama after thinking about them lol

    Blues_in_the_Night November 6, 2019 9:48 am
    I'm ashamed to say that I've read them already lol. Thanks anyway! It's weird watching Gintama after thinking about them lol sun_bae

    No need to be ashamed... I've read them multiple times ;) I've read all the djs with these two in them lol always great!!! It does throw you off a bit after reading these two then watching the anime :)

    sun_bae November 6, 2019 5:17 pm
    No need to be ashamed... I've read them multiple times ;) I've read all the djs with these two in them lol always great!!! It does throw you off a bit after reading these two then watching the anime :) Blues_in_the_Night

    (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づyay no kink shaming (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

sun_bae November 5, 2019 1:35 pm

I was wondering if anyone would be interested to join a sort of anxiety/depression support group?

Me and my friends where thinking of making one. Sometimes, it feels better talking to kind strangers online rather than real 'adults'. Of course, I support getting professional help whole heartedly but if anyone wanted to talk about anything, I'm free to listen and offer advice if I can :)

You can talk about anything at all and feel free to share or not as you like. Of course, we can talk about the new season of Cherry Blossoms too lol. It can be on LINE, Messenger or Insta, or whichever platform most people like.

<3 sunbaee <3

    sun_bae November 5, 2019 1:38 pm

    btw, if anyone cares I'm the one who did the infamous update on Love or Hate with the 4 % charge lool

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