YESSSS THIS IS WHAT IVE BEEN WAITING FOR !!! i love it i love it i love it
This is probably the first time I’ve found something hard to read simply because the story is plain. I like the horror-like moments with the black market scene and the way Doya can be ominous, but the story is just Yeon getting pushed around by Doya and easily being overpowered since the beginning. The start of the story was so bland that I almost dropped it in the first few chapters. It felt fast paced yet so slow and boring at the same time. It really has potential, and the author did a good job at making you feel bad for Doya and his past life, but there isn’t anything else he has going for him except for being a horrible person without consequence or development yet. And Yeon himself has nothing special at all. It’s hard to really click with these characters. I’m thinking of using the few things I do like from this story as inspiration for my own characters (who may or may not feature in a game I plan to make) lol. I am curious if there will be any development, so I’ll stick around
YEEESSSSSS I can’t wait to see what more we’ll see heheheheh I’m so obsessed with this rn. This and Mr A’s Farm are my (not so) guilty pleasures. I might need to make a list of these freaky ass stories that get me BARKING! I didn’t think I needed to be introduced to a transparency fetish but holy shit this is hot !!! I’m taking notes for my OCs ✍
HURRY UP. I WANNA SEE. I ALREADY SAID I WANNA SEE IT. HOW DARE WE BE BLUE BALLED LIKE THIS
call me a freak the way im excited to see how his transparency will play into this heheheh
is his stomach area transparent too is what i like to know ヾ(☆▽☆)
someone PLEASE FIX THIS. this is highkey unreadable and who tf decided to upload an entirely different story? the translation is awful and extremely low effort. this looks like it can be a decent story but holy shit its impossible to read. google translate is better than this slop. hell, if anyone has the raws, I’D TRANSLATE IT
they’re so domestic, i crave what they have. the raw, natural progress in their relationship. no crazy drama, no dropping their love on each other; just two guys loving each others company and not letting their gender get in the way of what feels natural. the way they draw each other in, enjoy the moment, and live in their own world is so beautiful. even out of my favourite stories, i think they hold the spot as best relationship so far. i dont even care what other motive seungmin has (though im sure we’re all aware hes doing some investigative work here), he clearly feels deeply for jaeyoung and doesnt force anything onto him. and jaeyoung accepts all of him in return with genuine reciprocation (even if he’s unaware haha). someday i want what they have.
I’m not fluent in Japanese but maybe I should do the honours and translate it the best I can
Yess please
Please please pretty please
You jumpscared me omg my name is toby and I always go by tobers on discord. twin, I’ll do it for you
Sgdydgg yay thanxxx my twin is the best
I need author to look at some dogs rq cause I’m still trying to figure out what breeds they are especially samsam. I assumed his boss is a doberman but his ears are weird and his tail doesn’t have the right colour (doberman tails don’t have a white tip). And samsam is just, a squirrel dog or smth
Maybe a golden retriever mixed with smth?
He looks like a poorly drawn Shiba Inu or a Korean Jindo. If he were a golden retriever he’d be fluffy all around, not just the tail. (I don’t suggest he’s a Pomeranian cause they mention him being a big breed.)
His tail doesn’t really look like it’s supposed to be a Shiba Inu or Jindo type tail. More like a poodle texture but his ears don’t match with poodle. I’ll just settle with some backyard bred doodle
Their grown tails can look that fluffy and squirrel like, more so with Shibas. I also wouldn’t put it past the artist just not knowing how puppy anatomy works and trying to miniaturize adult traits thinking it would fit. Plus big poodles aren’t very popular over there, the mini ones are and he’s stated to not be a small breed.
I’m going entirely based off looks here, which as I’ve stated, his tail is not the same texture nor shape as a Shiba Inu or Jindo. Doodle is the only thing closest in appearance that I could find
and this, everyone, is why we do a test spot on our arm haha! but omg finally his full white hair !! its cute!