it just gets to a point man. hades comes in and all he's doing is r4ping her now. and then other dude comes back and now is gonna do a jealously troupe when it wasnt even her fault and ofc they gotta do the whole "dw she's strong but when a man nonconsently touches her, suddenly she's too weak to pull away" bullshit
also why upload an untranslated chapter. just getting sloppy and lazy
1. would be decent if theyd shut up. im tired of their shitty ai-like dialogue during the sex scenes ("no i wont let him in" "ha u lost!" "no u did-" SHUT UP oh my god)
2. an insecure short man def made this or sh0tacon either or.. but based on how the women are drawn.. this is just straight male fantasy LMAO
shitty art with horrible anatomy
waited so long for the smut only for it to basically be sexual assault and r/pe. bottom continously says "no" and is super confused/upset
the first time was sexually assualt.
the second time (the actual deed) I don't think it was because he said he wanted the heat to be because of him. They just made him the nervous bottom they usually do. I do prefer when bottoms are more into it, but this one cried at the mere thought that it was someone else that caused it.
Overall, I actually really like it. The top does push away and go distant at the beginning of the heat and as soon as bottom found out, he verbally told top that he wanted to be the reason why.
As for the SA. There was no penetration and the bottom said that the top wasn't about to get h@rd (and top kinda showed he could not that it was any excuse) but the first time they tried, the moment bottom said no- top backed off and went distant to control himself.
Overall, he's like a light green flag. There's just one scene from where it was a little... red flags
but ultimately it's a helluva lot less than most bls and I find a lot of fluffiness from this and believe me I've read a lot of pure red/black flags
If you want something extremely similar but no assault I recommend "Give birth to a baby cub for me unless you want to see me loose my mind". Same premise of adopting a cat that turned out to be a shifter.
I know it's still rape in Omegaverse. You don't have to insult me just because you don't agree with me that there are reasonings behind it. They're supposed to act like animals. Have you seen it in the wild? It's rape from the animal kingdom. Here the only reason I wouldn't classify this as rape is because the author gave the go ahead but then pussy footed out by making the twink go 'Oh no stop~' when they practically said I wish I made you horny. It is poor writing that was supposed to be a final consent scene and the writer fucked it up. But this is my opinion. I won't call anyone stupid for theirs. We're adults.










im on ch 2 but the way they're introducing everything is so tacky and point-blank. "dont you know he's in crazy debt.. heh smth smth i heard his parents are making him pay for if" its so cringe im sorry they couldve introduced us this information in a more subtle way or a bit slower
ik manhwas are cringe in general with their story telling but this one takes the cake
Drop this it's not worth it dawg they made the top do a full 360 on his personality it makes zero sense
What manhwa did you read bro?? I understand not liking something or finding it cringe but you probably did not understand a single thing going on in the manhwa. The seme never did a 360, he was introduced as a narcissist rich asshole who constantly looks down on people. He never respected yeomin and has always been a self obsessed snob with no empathy. He he stays that way. This very trait of his actually comes biting his ass back when he DOES develop feelings for someone.
A person who constantly looks down on others would not know how to deal with a relationship cuz a relationship requires both to be on an equal footing, it's a flaw intentionally written to highlight the theme of the manhwa (financial power dynamics in relationships and how people in poverty cope with their circumstances and how the rich exploit the poor. Just over economic inequality is the theme) and for the theme his character is written fairly well (though really cringe, honestly I'm not even gonna defend the story on that. It really is fucking cringe many times )
Overall story is cringe but to say his character is inconsistently written is inaccurate
Most people read with their eyes closed apparently. It's surprising to see a lot of people complain about the top amping up the crazy as if there werent clear, blaring, signs before. Like are we dead ass rn even the bottom HIMSELF is aware of it loool