im on ch 2 but the way they're introducing everything is so tacky and point-blank. "dont you know he's in crazy debt.. heh smth smth i heard his parents are making him pay for if" its so cringe im sorry they couldve introduced us this information in a more subtle way or a bit slower
ik manhwas are cringe in general with their story telling but this one takes the cake
"how do you like the taste of my dick cheese" oh... ew ew ewewewew god this is horrible i couldnt even finish it
it just gets to a point man. hades comes in and all he's doing is r4ping her now. and then other dude comes back and now is gonna do a jealously troupe when it wasnt even her fault and ofc they gotta do the whole "dw she's strong but when a man nonconsently touches her, suddenly she's too weak to pull away" bullshit
also why upload an untranslated chapter. just getting sloppy and lazy
1. would be decent if theyd shut up. im tired of their shitty ai-like dialogue during the sex scenes ("no i wont let him in" "ha u lost!" "no u did-" SHUT UP oh my god)
2. an insecure short man def made this or sh0tacon either or.. but based on how the women are drawn.. this is just straight male fantasy LMAO
why do they keep tryna ship high schoolers with grown ass adults with jobs idc if they're "technically 19 years old !!!".. they way they go abt it is so weird and feels pedophilic
"i see u as a kid!"
"b-but im only 3 years younger than u even tho im STILL in high school"
cover page is just bait at this point random weird ass shit in here. don't read this at all
what kind of racist ass name is that????? ah yes lemme name a visibly brown man fucking "sombrero" tf??????? im mexican and thats just weird as hell
whats up with the missing translation on the first chapter
shitty art with horrible anatomy
waited so long for the smut only for it to basically be sexual assault and r/pe. bottom continously says "no" and is super confused/upset
why do yall keep reuploading the same last chapter im tired of getting notifications
clicked on this cuz the cover looked like hinata from haikyuu LMAO hopefully its good or smth
ugly art with no shading and the plot makes no sense author tries to start the reader off not knowing anything. it's just stupid.
"had sex with stranger that turned out to be co-worker at new work place and apparently he bit my neck and now he wants to marry"
bro what.. stupid plot
can yall stop double reuploading. if its been uploaded once and its good quality/translation.. THEN dont reupload the same chapter and bait ppl into thinking it got updated ! ugh
trying to say this in the least perverted way possible but the anatomy is so good! the art is rlly pretty and very fluid. like the way the flesh moves.. and squishes? i dunno how to explain but rlly good art !
also i hate daewon im sorry i know they're trying to redeem him but he literally r/ped the devil dude.. ("oh but he used to be a succubus" just sounds like a lame excuse tbh)
istg stop uploading if u have shitty quality ! or messed up translations ! no one wants to read that crap how hard is it to screenshot properly
ugh this author and ending the stories way too soon. i love their works but im always so sad when i reach the end </3
"main mc is a whore" he's literally getting r/ped by someone stronger than him. tf do yall expect him to do???? he's obviously not enjoying it with his boyfriend. yall weird af calling the main mc a whore when he's a victim of s/xual ab/se and domestic violence

















