beta
I wonder what happened to potato's mother? Has she looked for him? She took care of potato before he was kidnapped. There were a few chapters with his mother in it but more chapters mentioning his bio father. There's more information about him than her.
There was no need to princess carry someone when a clock hits their arm(?) Why should a student take another student to the hospital(?) That's a school staff or parent's duty.
Yamato should have told everyone he's in a relationship so people's delusions, including Fujiwara's, could be destroyed right then and there.
I know, Yamato and Kakeru wants to keep their relationship a secret from the public (excluding their friends) but I'm surprised that Yamato isn't right away bothered by everyone shipping and pairing him with a girl who has confessed to him before while he's already dating. Who's more important, your boyfriend or a classmate you already helped?
Is he really that unaware of his surroundings?
You cannot tell me that that hasn't happened before.
People telling others to stop hanging around their friend, does that really happen?
I feel there's going to be preventable problems.
I'm complaining now but I'm still going to read the story because I've been following it a very long time.
They're still kids while I'm already not close to their age range anymore. Maybe I just don't understand them at their age (￣∇￣")