Yana's Topics (9)

Okay I read a lot of these kind of stories going in and knowing it'll be slop but man this is definitely slop and not really the I'm laughing and enjoying it kind lol.

Like other people have mentioned FL redemption was so simple/easy. Everyone has like a single interaction with her, goes "oh she's different, mannn who would ever believe those rumors, she's a saint!" And it doesn't feel particularly earned. This doesn't mean I wanna see her suffer for like 50 chapters but I do wanna see some conflict/well written earned growth. There was a chance to see something like that with the redhead knight but his valid gripes (even if he was only looking at one half of the story) are just solved in the same night by one action. Like saving a child is big deal but I feel there would still be a wariness or at least a thought that maybe she's just doing this to look good from a person who doesn't trust her. Or he could have even gotten upset because she threw herself in without thinking and made it so the duke had to risk himself to save her along with already needing to save his daughter.

Along with this the prince. Him being weary of her makes sense but then he quite literally does the thing we all joke about "she's acting...different...I'm interested in her now." And it just feels so forced. Again I wouldn't wanna see him scrutinizing everything she does and making her the villain for like 50 chapters but there should be some sort of balance.

Overall not really sure I'm gonna keep reading this when I could just read a different(probably better) childcare/reincarnation narrative.

Now we gotta wait for him to showhole

There's nothing we can talk about and sit across a table and smile about...

CLEARLY SHE WANTS TO TALK AND CLEARLY SHE FEELS SIDELINED really upsetting she didn't shoot her a text cause I just KNEW Sara would still be expecting the date

This girl is emotionally constipated and it's tormenting me. I love you pink yuri and our toxic relationship

Why did the Marchioness suddenly grow claws lmao

Anyone know where I can read the webnovel for this?

Think I'm gonna put this one on hold but two questions first

So we know Master/Ekian is actually the son of the shrine woman and FL was given a mission related. Has she told Ekian what she said yet or has he told her the truth of his birth? I assume this is something they will drag out for AWHILE but would be nice to know if it has actually already happened (I doubt lol). Also how clueless is she to the fact that they are the same person...is it bad...

So I've read up to chapter 24 and honestly this sucks. The story feels disjointed and the villainess sister is so cartoonishly evil that it makes you roll your eyes. A cartoonishly evil villain can be fun and camp when written well but obviously that's not what's supposed to happen here/we're just being to be spoon fed a character that gives simple reasons to hate her and call it a day.

I think the story is trying to make itself seem more clever and tense then what it truly is and that's what's making it so hard to read. I got to chapter 9 and felt my interest really drain and then by 15 I was skimming more then actually taking the time to really think on the story (which honestly you don't have to put much effort in to do because this is so run of the mill).

Our FL holds no sense of maturity from living a past life and feels so flat and honestly toeing the line of damsel in distress despite supposedly being this mysterious mighty dark magic user. I don't expect her to be hard as steel badass who needs no help but I at least want her to properly use the resources available to her/come up with viable ways to get such help (so far the only examples I can think of where she does so is when she uses the tutor early on and using them again to encourage investments in a project she's trying to do).

I kept reading like maybe it'll get even at least just a little better...NOPE! I got to chapter 84 (I legitimately read up to 74 then skipped a little to 78 thinking okay not enough that it'll bring up drastic/important changes but enough to get out of the slog...) She complains about her status and keeps wishing to get her position back but does nothing proactively. It's clear we're supposed to feel sorry for her and her circumstances but really I just feel annoyed. I can't finish this lol.

I can't it was funny at first but now it's taking me out all the irl ceo references, don't know if I can do this