Think I'm gonna put this one on hold but two questions first
So we know Master/Ekian is actually the son of the shrine woman and FL was given a mission related. Has she told Ekian what she said yet or has he told her the truth of his birth? I assume this is something they will drag out for AWHILE but would be nice to know if it has actually already happened (I doubt lol). Also how clueless is she to the fact that they are the same person...is it bad...
So I've read up to chapter 24 and honestly this sucks. The story feels disjointed and the villainess sister is so cartoonishly evil that it makes you roll your eyes. A cartoonishly evil villain can be fun and camp when written well but obviously that's not what's supposed to happen here/we're just being to be spoon fed a character that gives simple reasons to hate her and call it a day.
I think the story is trying to make itself seem more clever and tense then what it truly is and that's what's making it so hard to read. I got to chapter 9 and felt my interest really drain and then by 15 I was skimming more then actually taking the time to really think on the story (which honestly you don't have to put much effort in to do because this is so run of the mill).
Our FL holds no sense of maturity from living a past life and feels so flat and honestly toeing the line of damsel in distress despite supposedly being this mysterious mighty dark magic user. I don't expect her to be hard as steel badass who needs no help but I at least want her to properly use the resources available to her/come up with viable ways to get such help (so far the only examples I can think of where she does so is when she uses the tutor early on and using them again to encourage investments in a project she's trying to do).
I kept reading like maybe it'll get even at least just a little better...NOPE! I got to chapter 84 (I legitimately read up to 74 then skipped a little to 78 thinking okay not enough that it'll bring up drastic/important changes but enough to get out of the slog...) She complains about her status and keeps wishing to get her position back but does nothing proactively. It's clear we're supposed to feel sorry for her and her circumstances but really I just feel annoyed. I can't finish this lol.
I can't it was funny at first but now it's taking me out all the irl ceo references, don't know if I can do this
good storyline and mentally strong fl.
in this list, you'll see more of a 'mentally strong women', which means smart, cunning, calculative and quick wicked.
i hate it when a 30 yrs old woman gets reincarnated as a 5 yrs old and acts like a baby + extra hate when they have a crush on a 5 yrs old so i'll try my best to not add those weird ass stories and instead add tolerable ones
i delete many of the stories i add later on if they become boring etc. even if they have a strong fl <3