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This is a story that tells you everything without showing you shit. Which is bad writing.
She’s supposed to be super smart (at least studious smart), strong, and capable. SO WHY is she always so conveniently stupid (ignoring a spell that triggered on her, left the evidence on the floor, needs help figuring out a lock spell when she studied magic), and weak (her magical strength feels undermined, and whenever she’s in trouble the ML swoops in to save her when she doesn’t need any saving??). Also WHY has she not tried to figure out why she’s having dream sex with the ML all the time??? Clearly magic has been used on them. Is that not cause for concern???
The author has once again failed to write a competent female character because if she was actually smart and strong, she wouldn’t be constantly floundering about her emotions with the ML. She’d have an actual backbone and a brain that wasn’t so dicked down that she could actually do something that mattered.
Also can we get rid of the stupid trope where somehow the FL saved the ML in their childhood and now she’s insecure cause she thinks it was someone else? It’s such an unearned reveal.
Is “ The Bewitching Temptress Wants to Seduce Her Husband” on this site under a different name?
“We don’t know each other anymore” is it on this site under another name? There a FL who leaves her fiancé before his coronation because as a kid he was a tsundere who said he’d rather die than marry her. And he chased after.
I get finding out her sister murdered her and she can’t go home anymore is extremely traumatizing….
BUT how can she be so insecure in her standing in this world when there a rich noble guy who’s been in love with her for 10 years and literally had a cross branded into his skin because he couldn’t let her go. Sure she’s a “commoner” but she could also use her 21st century knowledge and even story knowledge to do something crazy shit and become someone of a higher standing.