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I really like names of the characters in this story. It's very rare to see Slavic names in yaoi, and they are common and normal names. You can tell when author is not familiar with different cultures where story is located by ridiculous names, but not here.
I was reading this chapter while listening to Tool - The Patient, and it was such a hard read. Never kill yourself, life is too precious and all your current problems are just seemingly unbearable, all will pass but shortening your karmic cycle could cost you greatly.