kinda hilarious that this is basically "you don't get it I can fix him ~" but like x2
funny how even tho theyre a bunch of drawings whats good about them is that personality wise u feel there's chemistry.
Also, "sluts in a yukata" is such a great vibe to start a yaoi manga with I commend the mangaka hahaha
i like this as a story, but at the same time it feels like we're bombarded all the time with overexplanations of how they each feel instead of it being shown to us through their actions, as if the audience wont get it unless you spell everything out. It completely loses all the magic of storytelling. Genuinely think if the mangaka cut half the internal monologues this would already be better. Feels like it got way too dramatic for what it is also >__> maybe it's also cause of the internal monologues idk.
Yeah I feel you. I think they really tried to cram such a complex situation into a really short story. I agree, we were bombarded with near constant inner monologues but if the story were just a bit longer (not too much), it would have felt a bit more digestible. I skipped a lot of the inner dialogue and missed important details, so I kept having to reread the scene to better understand but it also pulled me out of the story too much. It was all too much and not enough at the same time :/ the art work is absolutely stunning though!
at this point I wish bl authors actually like had a life before writing romance stories because clearly they can't even imagine a decent one by themselves.
This person's best friend and boyfriend BOTH know he was drugged and yet NEITHER OF THEM TELL HIM???? And we're supposed to what, be super into Yoo Il throwing a jealous fit over it and wannabe rapist childhood friend basically hiding it because he fucking TOOK ADVANTAGE OF HIM OVER IT SO HES GUILTY AND COVERING HIS TRACKS???
WHAT ARE THESE PPL DOING MAN I CAN'T
Like let's ignore the fictional yaoi drug that always gets all the mcs that works like extasy but like 10 times more horny yet also makes you drowsy and forgetful like benzos yet also euphoric and having trouble to contain your impulses like strong alcohol, this is still a fucking ridiculous situation. IF I HAD BEEN DRUGGED AND MY BF AND MY BFF DIDNT TELL ME ID HAVE FELT SO BETRAYED, IM SO TURNED OFF BY BOTH OF THEIR BEHAVIOURS. They both say they like him yet they dont do the bare minimum I cant.
Never mind the cartoon villain guys who are apparently hooked on drugs and do anything for them yet never act high or on edge lol like what. I know Korea is hard on drugs but I mean these people are on same fictional drugs my grandma made up in her head from the 70s propaganda after school specials like I cant even take anything happening seriously at this point. Honestly sucks because I really liked the story at the start.
girl what is happening that man is either developmentally challenged or he's doing it on purpose I have no clue
Also the weirdly super-white-looking yet biracial person trope strikes again. Like you could have made him just be German and like a weeb about Japan or something lol how does he look like that and have a Japanese mom thats not how genes work bruh