It was cute until they jumped into stupid conclusions when a "wait what do you mean?" would solve it ugghhhhh And how could they even communicate? Is this a parallel universe where everyone speaks the same language?
Thank god it wasn't only me. I was so confused and frustrated when they Sal was like "Forget me" DAHECK? Baby, please talk PROPERLY. Ugh, that was a stupid plot device. I wish the author wasn't rushed to make that because it could've been so much better!
The dialogue is flowery, they communicate through a magical mirror (with no explanation as to why it even exists or how it works), Shaal's country felt like some vague exotic country in another world entirely--Heck, they had some foreign country gift him spices or something and said they had a beautiful princess?? It was weird to see him in a plane, like Japan isn't far from his place. There's a loooot of things that are strange in this story. Best not to think about the trivial details because it'll ruin the magic. It's a beautiful story despite its flaws. I enjoyed it. V:
She had stated in more then one chapter that after being treated like a child for so long, that she feels she has regressed mentally PigyzSempai
That's not an excuse, that's just poor writing. The whole rebirth thing could've been taken out and not much would change considering they also used the excuse of her "blood" as to why she was a coherent baby.
That's not an excuse, that's just poor writing.The whole rebirth thing could've been taken out and not much would change considering they also used the excuse of her "blood" as to why she was a coherent baby. Roa
It’s a work of fiction, I wouldn’t take it to seriously.
It’s a work of fiction, I wouldn’t take it to seriously. PigyzSempai
That doesn't mean bad story elements get a free pass. It certainly nothing to drag the conscious, but I'm not dumb enough to just accept things that are stupid.
That doesn't mean bad story elements get a free pass. It certainly nothing to drag the conscious, but I'm not dumb enough to just accept things that are stupid. Roa
Wow your right, stupid isn’t the word I’d use to decribe you.
Could it be that maybe that friend with glasses mistook the "psychopath" with his sister since they look so similar? Maybe he covered for her and the sister is the psycho Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)
It was cute until they jumped into stupid conclusions when a "wait what do you mean?" would solve it ugghhhhh
And how could they even communicate? Is this a parallel universe where everyone speaks the same language?
Thank god it wasn't only me. I was so confused and frustrated when they Sal was like "Forget me" DAHECK? Baby, please talk PROPERLY. Ugh, that was a stupid plot device. I wish the author wasn't rushed to make that because it could've been so much better!
I feel like in a world where a mirror can transport you across the world, people can just understand each other. Logic was never part of the story.
The story isn't very logical in the first place. It felt more like a modern fairy tale rather than a realistic telling of an every day romance story.
The dialogue is flowery, they communicate through a magical mirror (with no explanation as to why it even exists or how it works), Shaal's country felt like some vague exotic country in another world entirely--Heck, they had some foreign country gift him spices or something and said they had a beautiful princess?? It was weird to see him in a plane, like Japan isn't far from his place. There's a loooot of things that are strange in this story. Best not to think about the trivial details because it'll ruin the magic. It's a beautiful story despite its flaws. I enjoyed it. V: