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so read this yaoi awhile back in mangarock,,,,at the time it had like 1/2 chaps only.. and i couldn't remember it's name,,, ;-;
so, black-haired(uke assumed) guy, lives in the same 1LDK aparment with blond-haired(seme assumed) and seme is an artist/painter of some sort that is very popular, both of them are not exactly friends from the get-go, uke knew about seme when searching for a place to rent and knew him through his friend, this friend is close to seme and had known him since childhood. uke is eccentric and very calm-and-collective most of the time, both of them is pursuing painting in college but uke is like normal(in his pov) while seme is super famous and skilled. people around them regarded uke as like seme's parent or caretaker bc seme's like a puppy for uke. uke always wake up to find seme is either jerking off to him on his face/ he already jerked off and went back to bed but the cum is still on uke's face (lmaoo) then uke scolded seme and seme start distancing himself. but uke felt bad bc he's used to seme being such a puppy for him, but he still doesn't do anything yet at this point. then uke wins a painting competition for the first time despite always being "normal-skilled" . he's so exited he went and hug seme and they talked and they became okay again, and seme kissed uke intensely and uke kissed back confused kinda but not really. then seme gave uke a hickey on his neck and called it a "collar" , uke blushed run away into their house.
basically seme called the jerking off to uke's face situation as marking him as his.. SOME ONE HELP PLS, I'M DESPERATE.
[genre:romance] idc, some good shoujos w/ good stories and bearable mc,(hopefully not some annoying ones)
GIVE ME LOTS~ BC I THINK I'VE READ SO MANY ALREADY,AND I'M PRETTY SURE I'M GONNA FINE A LOT THAT I'VE READ :D
*thank you so much* ;3
man i hate when authors tries to justify shitty behavior with "i just love you, idk how to love you but i do" SUCH A TIRING TROPE BROOOOO LIKE STOPPPP if you want to make a story abt a manipulative fucker that doesn't know how to love fucking up again and again but is trying to do better, WRITE THAT. like SHOW THAT IT'S CREEPY AND WEIRD. why are you trying to portray the bad actions with emphatically??? why are you trying to make this as a "sweet" behavior suddenly??? you did understand that a story must be a continuous thing to be a story right??? why the fuck is your story so fucking disjointed? it's like he never did anything bad
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