I'm unable to enjoy any plot with the story being all over the place y'all like
bc yk how dark this webtoon can get, this feels like the calm before the storm like it feels dangerous man i hope nothing happens to them and the baby
if sowoon is actively writing like as the days come, why the fuck is the work handed like as a one time shit ykwim like he gave the TA the work already and the story is unfolding as it goes and it's not like he gave him like a daily update or smth so is the story just a prediction of the days that come leading to the other guy leaving? like imo there's so many like weird messy plot holes going on like a lot. hence why j feel like this is bad writing. it's a great concept for sure and the art is amazing but author should really re-examine their story flow again
LMAO BC ILAY IS OUT HERE LITERALLY IN LOVE WITH TAE AND IT'S MESSING UP WITH HIS WHOLE PLAN AND TAE IS ALSO ANGRY BC HE CLEARLY IS UNABLE TO HATE ILAY HDHEJSHSHSJSKSUDNEJS
yea I don't wanna talk abt "oh she's this she's that" " oh he's this he's that" , i just wanna say, if you're gonna make a manhwa so focused on romance, why title it smth like " the heir of the dragon slayer sword" and the korean sites also put this under female led action☠☠☠like this ain't it brother i was baited
but i would NEVER want to be in it , that shit scary ☠☠☠ like if i have a friend's that's an omega or smth i would be so fucking protective of them bc hell naw you're telling me people wanna rape you after they smell you??? fuck that shit man
like fuck i cannot continue reading if he just became these rapists's child bearer and cliff doesn't come back. idc idc i need cliff to come back for him. if not have his absence be explained. like bro the chapters are getting shorter and few and far between. with absolutely not enough plot to explain all that's happening
I've been reading this every year once. this and 'miren girl miren boy'. even after quite literally memorizing the whole thing i will still cry. my annual cry fest
got to ch.8 before tbh everything got super fucking unappealing as a story. you're trying to tell a story with dark undertones but downplay the utter bullshit that the dad is pulling. yea i understood nuance in his behavior is bc of his circumference but fuck that shit bc why is this "oh i adopted a kid and make them act for me but I'm not going to respect or treat them as a child and expects them to perform their best for me but I'm still a good character guys, I'll bond with her later" LIKE WHAT??? fuck that man. yea you can love the story for that but I can't stand that shit. dropped.
can't you talk? explain smth to peter. it all seems so much like a plot starter bc you're not this dumb according to this story linus, neither is Peter. but why are you making mistakes like a fucking teenager??? talk. explain yourself, explain the situation. literally it is not that hard.
WHY WHY WHY. LITERALLY WE ALL KNOW WHERE THIS IS GOING. WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH WOMEN BEING NORMAL COMMUNICATIVE FRIENDS BRUH???? WHY CAN'T AUTHORS STOP FUCKING PITTING WOMEN AGAINST EACH OTHER OVER A FUCKING MAN. WHY i was loving the story bc it's like the early lighthearted days of shoujos but ofcourse. it just had to be fucking RUINED.
i reread this again bc i love the artsyle BUT DAMN TAHARA SITUATION IS HITTING HARD BC I DEFINITELY WOULD BE LIKE HIM IN THAT POSITION MY HEART IS HURTING FOR HIM ANS HIS ONE SIDED LOVE
no forcing, just open communication and actually verbal consent love it sm plus bigger bottom, and as a boss he really is just kind
the girl disappearing??? am i missing smth like shouldn't they be onto the club's managers and like cctv or smth poor mc if he really is just an innocent guy tryna make a living