I think it's all right story, but there are a few major things that bother me about this. I'm in a ranting mood today sorry.
They've been chasing her for years, but there's a 6 year difference. Like you don't think about it when you're an adult, but like that's too big a difference especially since she's only been an adult for a couple of years. I may have missed how long she knew them, but it was at least before she graduated because he just got back from military service which is usually 2 years. The author should have made the age gap closer by maybe 2 to 3 years but made it creepy that they were literally chasing after a child while an adult in the past.
They also got her drunk and stripped her naked and were naked themselves. Insinuating they were going to rape her cause she mentioned a threesome with "strangers" on the internet. This could have been told differently. There was no conversation about hooking up before stripping her. This could have been told differently.
They also had no prep anal which is honestly the worst. As someone who's experienced that it's fucking awful. It is not that easy to put it in and dry anal hurts and is not pleasurable, especially your first time.
I like this story so far, but he's such a pos I hope she gets away and he dies alone.
Umm.....you catching him trying to stab Emily and him bashing your face in is not enough proof? Let alone the witness for the first time she was attacked isn't enough to bring suspicion.....I don't get it I must be an idiot.
There was no witness to that, also it would make her reveal that Cecil is Cecilia. Also they said that since he is backed up by a bigger noble, then Cecilia's testimony would be overruled.
Okay so then I am an idiot lol
Does Anyone know where you can buy the books? I can't seem to find them.
Thanks so much. I;m a little sad I can't afford to buy them ):
Maybe I misread the whole conversation, but to respond to "You'll execute me once you get bored with me" with "Even so I have feelings for you now". Bro, Did you just admit you might execute her when you get bored of her wtf. I would hightail my ass outta there if I was her.
How many different names are they going to call her? Eve, Ivy, Ibelia, Vivian? Like this is going to eventually get confusing if a set name isn't used for each chapter.
This story was a bit confusing for me It's probably cause I'm dumb as shit, but I can't find the motives behind most of the stuff. I also feel like some things are placed in there without context. I'm so angry that she ended up with him. He's an emotionally abusive POS who got her brother killed. He only wanted her to suffer and rely on him. I think the ending would have been better with him dying, her being sad about it and her and her son figuring out how to live without him. Not everything has to have "happy" endings.
Bro if someone called me disgusting while dating I'd do the same thing. I'm disappointed that he gave in so easily just cause he cried. For me, It would take at least a serious conversation. Boohoo you're crying because I threw your words back at you and it hurt your feelings. Get over it, isn't that how you wanted me to do? I'm a Petty Bitch though.
Same I'm petty af. But I'm guessing it's because he got traumatized. I'm bi and I have to sometimes say things so my family doesn't know. I just make a disgusting face but still show my support by giving them shit when they say messed up things. Idk if I'm doing a good job at hiding it . The point is my dumbass would probably do the same in both situations. The guy seemed like he was still really scared of people talking bad about his bf. He liked him since kids and then hears crap about him. Idk hide my feelings just so that person never has to hear them themselves. But if I was in the others side I'd be so mad
I've read some of the spoilers and understand why they are acting like this, but I wish the author didn't set it up like this. They never set her up to act like she was looking for attention let alone make no sense that the first time she did it would be with poison. If Rize was also poisoned by a gift from her and it was simple thread the most logical answer be that Edith was the target and the poisoner didn't know it was a gift. Like the person who did it thought Edith would use it. I know that Rize is in control, but at least make it logical and not an accusation feast for no reason every time. It gets tiring. I like the story, but the illogical accusations out of nowhere make it irritating.
Honestly, they'd be getting sued for slander left right and center the way they just screech about Edith being to blame for everything with no investigation or evidence what so ever.
Why would he need an excuse to expel him? He escaped an island prison wouldn't that make him a wanted man?