lenaGRonyx's manga / #gay pregnancy(49)

|Chapter 45| I like it, it's a pretty built story, Isaac is dangerous and tough (for "once" the uke is cool/the cooler). But too bad cause the plot is "realistic", mature, deep and then, Felix come, with a childish attitude and ruin every serious business. The first impression is good, he is sexy, serious, looks dangerous and to know his business,.. he's a fucking leader, boss in arms trafficking, worlwide knowed, and still, you don't know how, doesn't act like it. Besides that, fell in love with Isaac out of nowhere (he spoke with him 2 times 3 sec and Bam), too fast, and started acting like a 10 years old in love, ugh.. and he speaks too much. While sensitive moments (critical emotional) he runs a monologue of love and possessiness ruining the climax yet I'm sure 4 words or conveys max 2 ideas within 2 sentences would have a greater impact. I am sad, I would have liked it more if the "heavy" and triller mood was held the whole story and so adjust Felix's character.

|Chapter 87| It made me laugh at first, too bad the author didn't keep the mood (it's poorly written so going to serious with the mood make the comic looking lame). The main problem for me is characters building. And there's thing really getting on my nerve, frist Will's tattoo keep changing place or disappearing (not important but I NEED to say it), second characters change their look without reason and logic (the reason is the author need them to be more lovable, I saw it so it's fucking annoying), third the way characters are in love or their dynamic couple ended to be too similar (Like Terry changed too much but ok, then Will ended just like Terry.. why? They are totally not the same)

|Chapter 88| I like eyes changing colors It's too long no? Like half of the chapters looks like extra, makes it look bad.

Hard to follow the supernatural logic, which doesn't seem really well build and also no contant, just not necessary complicated to make it looks like something amazing. And I would have prefered if while the second pregnancy, Theo took Calion as his second capri in orther to protect Seram and theirs positions, their child and pregnancy (to make believe Calion fathered the second pregnancy and to sent away Seram and their child, to rebuild Langeres). Their reunion would have been more rewarding and heart-warming.

|Chapter 34 - Dropped| First "What does he mean it's his first time?? He's been cheated on multiple times and just got out of a 3 year relationship" and like always, didn't ship with the successful rich alpha. Poorly written and bad translate, so it's too annoying to keep up (and since the "level of writting", it doesn't make sense Hesoo didn't fall in love with Taeoh, he is his type by his looks, he is kind, attentionate, in good terms with his family, cares about his son, his son loves him, his son's teacher and neighbour so they see each other all the time, and an alpha so they should be alchemy). I was waiting to see Taeoh's past (I suppose he is son of a mafia boss), but I gave up.

Poorly written, so it's bad. Loved the miscarriage and all the psychological aspect of the plot (suicide, therapy for psychopath (xD)), it changes but rarely well handled (the worst was the family gathering after the miscariage, the author wanted it to not be too heavy and so use the gag "he cries easily" the whole fucking chapter, one not funny and two if you empathise at least a little with the couple who lost their baby, it was fucking horrible to read). And what the heck with this end, it's not finished.

|Chapter 27| Looked forward but disappointerd, still it's beautifully written (looks like someone with life experience) --Chapter 2: That is the first chinese comic that looks well written, the feels and poetic sentences are there just with chapter 1 and 2-- --Chapter 3: No way.. NO WAY! The alpha got a child with someone else, a lover, a LIFE?! It's fucking logic but it never happens!!! I am so shocked, a little sad 'cause bittersweet and very excited! Drama and complicated plot or is it just a trick the author made to make it looks like it?! If it's a trick, for onece it's well done. ... Maybe it's not his child since their babies have the same age and he was single and freshly graduated-- --Chapter 5: Fuck, he's not! XD-- --Chapter 8: NO! I'm looking at my ceilling, so desappointed. Marriage proposal on chapter 8?! Fuck youuuuuuu XD--

|Chapter 113 - Dropped| --Their newborn is an alpha female in a world without second gender, THAT is interristing--

|Chapter 3 - Dropped|