lenaGRonyx's manga / #gay pregnancy(49)

|Chapter 5.5|

|Chapter 26 - Dropped| Seem interesting because of the context of this world (extinction of omegas) but I read a little, it doesn't quite grasp enough the omegaverse feeling/logic and later I saw a chapter were the alpha abandon the omega in heat thinking it's for the best, it fucked hurt me.

|Chapter 65|

|Chapter 77 - Dropped| It was fucking lame and awfully written (I have a lot of time). Plus Iri excited me at first, in like the 2 first chapters but after that his vibe disappointed me and the storyline didn't take the turn I hoped for. Kiyo is too stupid young, and everyone is lame. Cringed me as fuck

Maybe if it was longer and wellhanded, but without the baby with 4 DNA

|Chapter 24 - Dropped| It looked so great, the first sex scene is overwhelming (suffocating just at drawing) but it's boring, the plot is simple and common but never wellhanded (ah... no, I just read one which was not so bad "Hydrangea Cage" but it's too short to be really noticed), it just end up with too much sex for nothing with lame dominant play and rubbish dirty talk (please, just do it right for fuck sake) and talking always leading to nothing. Plus there's a child in this story, it's like he's not there, he's an accessory in their relationship, nothing much (seriously why don't you use him in your story?)

|Chapter 19| I kinda like it, wait and see next

|Chapter 12|