Well your sexualitet dosent define you, so i dont know why so many freak out about it when is a gay guy. What about all the “straight” guy/girls who is made homosexual. So i think is good with a change as long as is a healthy made and not forced :) reply
Yikes my dude! You really decided to throw yourself to the sharks huh?
If you’re really not understanding why so many people here are being so harsh.....
consider this,
you’ve essentially used the identity of a oppressed minority as a gimmick for your story.
And not only are you perpetuating a dangerous and harmful belief about the LGBTQ+ com...... reply
In all honestly its not badly written for a wattpad story (I'm assuming) but you really don't need the gay tag line. He's already "Arrogant" which is enough reason to not be into your protagonist.
If you REALLY want to do a lgbtq+ story, just make him bi or pan and have it he kissed ONE dude and now everyone calls him gay or something because soci...... 2 reply
NOOOOO get out of here with that. tf you mean why is he kissing her. this is disrespect. i wanna slap you. my response to this bull is just going to be no honey. reply
If I’m being completely honest, I’d give it a four out of ten (4/10). Now before you come in with your copied and pasted reply, I just want to say a few things about your writing.
Now this will sound mean, but bare in mind that this is constructive criticism, along with blatant criticism.
Your story sounds like a typical wattpad story and ...... 1 reply
I couldn't even get through it. You need to take the part about him being gay out. That doesn't make any sense and it really grosses me out that you're fetishizing them like that. If you wanted to make the character bisexual but didn't fetishize them either I think you'd be clear but that gay thing is outta pocket and you need to stop treating them...... reply
honestly this did NOT have to be about turning a GAY MAN STR8 you coulda did sum like hes a mafia boss or famous but like...chile...no...the fetishsizing here is too much. you just got yourself cancelled reply
stop fetishizing gay men and leave them alone. This is honestly the most disgusting read I've ever had the displeasure of reading and I hope you know that this kind of storyline won't get you anywhere and would probably only ruin your reputation as an author. Also putting i.e in a sensual scene doesn't make it sound sexy at all. Also like a pro? I...... reply
