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Ayato 20 10,2020

Only thing I'm gonna say is that you're seriously brave to share this on mangago out of all the places. 1 reply

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jays_so_fineeee 20 10,2020

I ain't reading all that too long reply

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staytrashy 20 10,2020

So this is the summary of your Wattpad novel, huh? I’ll try to give an honest review. I’m a writer myself, and I can say with confidence that your writing’s immature and cliche. Throughout your Wattpad story, there’s random capitalizations of words (or not capitalizing words such as ‘I’), which shows no one betas your works/you don’t...... 3 reply

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Minmi 20 10,2020

ooh god please tell me your story is not about a gay guy who's going to fall in love with a girl because he wasn't that gay in the first place Even if it's a misunderstanding and it's about an heterosexual couple I prefer not to rate this because I don't like when female characters are just naive submissive passive and discovering everything when ...... 1 reply

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Teacher getting to know you [Question]

YourDailyDoseOfRandomBullCrap 20 10,2020

My teacher is eager to get to know us and I'm sitting there in my chair awkwardly

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NahThanks 20 10,2020

Set aside the kiss scene. Can we talk about the title first reply

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Kat 20 10,2020

The writing is great, you really went into detail....a little too much detail. If you're gonna publish this please shorten the kiss scene writing, make it sweet, sultry, yet quick so the reader doesn't get bored with it. In addition this was a nice story and your writing skills are great but the subject.....It's a little rude, not to mention it's f...... 1 reply

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