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ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ why hello please reccomend me some omegaverse like love is an illussion ah you know what nvm anything is fine as long as they had children why? cause fuck life uh sorry unrelated(⌒▽⌒)
http://www.mangago.me/home/mangalist/964633/
It's a list i made full of bl with kids involved not all of them are Omegaverse but hopefully it can be of use
In terms of flow, at the start it did seem to flow evenly especially with the characters.
The villains where effective in a way but also forgettable and that just feels wrong at a point.
The romance was building up nicely but the consensus was underwhelming in a way that it felt it wasn't anything special. The after actions of the confession seems lacking and even Danny just feels like he was used for the sake of defeating the pope and, then his screen time decreases. I atleast hoped that there will be scenes where they show that they do look as Danny as their son but Welp.
Either way it was a good read!