I liked it but my god there was so much going on for no reason, especially towards the end. Sleep walking. Edward losing his entire business. Percy attempts murder for like the 4th time. FL also makes insanely stupid decisions with no regard for her life, and the way she so easily believes Percy knowing he threatened Madelyn and also kidnapped them prior, is ridiculous. Like he's a cheater, refused to help FL, kidnapped them, repeatedly ruins ML's life - but for some reason FL trusts him over ML? ML's reasons are a little empty but overall I liked him the most. Author also throws away characters like nothing. Madelyn gets shoved off to boarding school. Batten comes & goes. FL's friend suddenly shows up with a train ticket despite not helping her "friend" for the 3 years she struggled. The writing also is very messy and hard to read at times. It's not clear who's speaking at times and the inner thoughts are constantly switching mid chapter.
The ending is fine for me, though I would've liked to see more of the older gameplay and the Doha before he met Bada, how Bada gained consciousness...oh well.
What's crazy though are readers' inability to imagine things when the concept of the story isn't based in reality. For 80 chapters you will accept that people can be sucked into video games, but you need an explanation on how their bodies survived that whole time?? It's make believe!
She caved so quickly. That last push really means nothing when the whole lead up her face is screaming that she actually does care. I'll be dropping this now
I never fall for the sad backstories anyway, but wow this one makes me think there's something wrong with me bc I genuinely do not gaf
To those calling ML a slut/whore. Does the fact that he was neglected & abused in his childhood and that he was being preyed upon by adults, mean nothing to you?
"Why is he such a slut" why are YOU expecting a person, who grew up being physically & sexually abused, to behave normally in relationships? Please if you can't handle "flawed" characters then stick to your no personality having ones
And still no reason why he left. Eunhyuk stans are really something. 1 chapter and they're accusing Dohwa of something that's not within his character, but 100 chapters of Eunhyuk time and time again refusing to talk to Sooae, but we're supposed to be patient and "wait for the reason" and to not "mischaracterize" Eunhyuk
I never wanna blame the woman, but my god you see how unstable your brother is and yiu insist the go and try make up with the person they're so obsessed with? Family of fukn idiots
So if the mc is a violent rapist it's all good but god forbid there's a slutty twink.
Dropping because the mc is already acting like a loser and the rape is being overlooked. I was hoping for a strong mc but why are you getting hard in broad daylight?? I hate when their inner monologue is all "I hate this guy I never wanna see him again" but all their actions scream pick me, look at me. You were raped but of course, you HAVE to return the gift cause it was expensive. Have some self respect smh
It's a major plothole if the doctor did blood work but doesn't know that the MC is omega. And if she does know, why is she so willing to risk pregnancy. Author wtf are you doing
The rape and SA is so unecessary. I get it, ML is a bad guy who murders people, but if you're gonna try and make the rape comedic, then don't do it from the start
Really bad writing. I get it's meant to be lighthearted but the author just throws in so many random moments to they never have to explain things. Just lazy writing imo
I like the characters, the plot, and appreciate the lack of focus on romance, but man has the author really dumbed down the writing. Sometimes it feels like the author is just telling us things directly i.e., "I hid the potion in my hair which is why seth & cale didnt find it", okay... I didn't need to be told that. I can deduce that she hid a potion in her hair when she pulled it out of her hair.
And although our mc IS intelligent, the way it's written makes me feel like the author is trying to convince US that she's smart, rather than the surrounding characters. We know she's smart and we know WHY she's smart. But the writing is too directed to the audience, it plays off like the author is just saying "Think this" "Feel this" rather than writing in a way that readers would be able to come to that conclusion themselves
He bought his granny a fridge so now the MC is wavering? Nevermind the brutal rapes he had to endure, so damn pathetic
MC sucks. There's no apology or redemption arc. He's cruel to ML, breaks his OWN contract, has the baby and decides he wants to stay with ML. And there's never even a point where he, himself admits this or communicates with ML. Literally, not even a "I'm sorry for what I said, I actually want to stay with you and the baby". ML just magically knows and voices everything for MC. What a joke
I already knew this when he got away with raping and forcing a prenancy onto Hyesung, even coming out as a fan favourite for a while but this just really solidifies things. Glad i dropped the og when hyesung went back to Dojin, not surprised to see the author is still a fukn loser
Oh no I hope he doesnt like Clara as well. I like the family dynamic the Ruby knights have, and introducing a genuine second ML (Gustav does NOT count) seems really messy for this plot because there's already a lot happening
It's okay but the FL is giving y/n. It's lame how the only reason she has an eye for art and inventions is because she's from the future, but we're suppose to be impressed as readers? She's also so clueless and the pacing of her uncovering why the story changed is too slow. In nearly 50 chapters, all she has done so far is make a list of things that have changed. It feels like the author has forgotten about it. She's also frustrating cause she knows Edwin is destined to be poisoned, but still believes he and og FL should end up together? What about her sister and William? She's honestly a fool
The ML too, he truly believes his life was written out for him and he had no choice, but is judgemental of other characters because of their past lives. There's no consideration from him that everyone was written to be like that and also had no free will? It's an obvious plot hole that isn't being addressed.
I read to chap 28 and skipped to the latest cause the ML is so forceful, I wanted to see if he improves at all...Yet the chapter I read is him raping the MC.
Will be dropping this cause it's clear the author romanticizes rape, even in the latest chap the MC is already on the verge of forgiving the ML. What a total waste