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I wanted to wait until ch. 77 is uploaded here to post this but I can't wait two more weeks (￣∇￣").

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That chapter wrecked me. It's been one week since I read it and I'm still not over it. Just thinking about almost makes me cry. That dream sequence was pretty much the most heart-touching and saddest scene I've ever seen in a BL-story.

I don't want this series to end but on the other hand I'm also happy that it'll most likely end on a strong note.
Besides, Juns already said that she's going to write more comics. She's a brilliant author and I can't wait to see what she comes up with.

Ahjussi is not dead. She only told us that this was her first idea for the ending. We already saw the ending and he's still alive. They just broke up, nobody's dead, nobody killed himself. You can calm down now ;) .

I'm pretty sure I won't make many friends with this comment but I still want to write it down because I'm really frustarted right now.

What was the concept of this series? To me it felt like 57 chapters of nothing. She wasted the body-swap storyline. The MC didn't change at all despite the fact that he lived inside the body of a guy who was the exact opposite of him.
The twin storyline was equally disappointing. It was kind of pointless. It was all about the question why the other guy killed himself and why his borther treated him like that. Besides the fact that the reason was extremely generic, why did she make a story that was centered around a character who was already dead? We don't know that other guy and nobody in this story, not even the MC actually cared about that guy. They just used what happend to him to get rid of the brother.
The last chapter: The MC told the brother that his twin-brother had killed himself and the brother didn't ask any questions about that. Why not? Well, we have to come up with our own explanations because Haribo didn't provide one for us... again. Tbh it almost feels like, at some point, she lost control over this story.

To me pretty much everything felt unfinished and underdeveloped. Like she only had a vague idea of what she wanted to write but she didn't have a real plan for her story.
She could've done so much more with this story and it was a real let down for me because at the beginning I thought this could become something really good (now I'm glad I only bought 10 chapters).
I hope that for the next story she'll take more time to work on the storyline and the concept (and she won't stall as much as she did in this story) because I truly believe that she's able to write something great.

-She can't talk about what the apple symbolizes because that would be a spoiler
-She can't talk about the second floor because that would be spoiler
-She can't talk about how she came up with the title "Killing Stalking" because that would be a spoiler

I guess the first two statements mean that we'll finally get Sangwoo flashbacks next season and I already have at least 3 different theories for the last one #－.－) .
I need the third season NOW.

Btw the first question (Do you have any new title planned for after you complete KS?If so can you give us some details?) sounds a little bit like KS is going to end soon. We know that she planned 3-5 seasons, so maybe season 3 will be the last one?

From whiteuniform scanlations:

"I uploaded Deri Pocha Chapter 6 to Batoto at 2am (GMT+8) but I later discovered that I had accidentally uploaded Chapter 5 instead.
As of 3am (GMT+8) I have removed the wrong chapter and uploaded the correct one, pending Batoto’s approval. Unfortunately, the wrong upload has since gone live on Mangago and I apologise for any confusion on the matter."

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Why did they have to put "WARNING: GRAPHIC CONTENT" in the caption for episode 35? After episode 26 we all know what that means. They only do it when there's rape in it.
They basically tell you what is going to happen before you even read the episode.
I wish they would stop doing this and just warn the readers in the editor's comment that there's rape in this series. This stupid warning ruined this season's finale for me (╬￣皿￣)凸.

Standard disclaimer:
This is a script for ch. 33. You can use it to read the raws. There should be a link somewhere in the comments but I don't want to search for it or check if parts of the chapters weren't uploaded.
I read the English version you can find here: https://www.lezhin.com/en/comic/darkheaven
and I don't want read spoilers from the Korean version. This is my favourite webcomic and I'm going to stop with the scripts immediately and delete every script I posted if somebody spoiles the story for me in a reply.
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C=Conor
S=Simon
V=Veronica
K=Kiev
IM= inner monologue

The numbers stand for the panels with text. So "1." means the first panel in which a character says or thinks something. "2." the second and so on.
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After the concert a T-Rex talent scout gives his card to Simon and Conor, Kiev is standing behind him.
After that we see Veronica.
1.
Guy giving a speech: “…As such…We hope that our magazine will be a field of communication and exchange for many musicians.” “To meet the era of specialization, the magazine is taking a leap forward into this new genre of music. I pray that the future of the magazine will be met with many blessings. I would like to thank all of you for coming out tonight. Thank you
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Ms. Radissa to V: “Congratulations. It almost makes me jealous to see how quickly your father’s business has grown.”
V to Ms. Radissa: “Thank you editor-in-chief Ms. Radissa. It’s been so long.”
Ms. Radissa to V: “Oh, do you remember me? I haven’t seen you at the last few ceremonies. Look what a beautiful lady you’ve grown into.”
V to Ms. Radissa: “Thank you for the compliment. I’ve been busy with my studies.”
Ms. Radissa to V: ”You’re in college, aren’t you? Haha, how pretty you are.”
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Other people to V: “So your father’s still quiet aggressively expanding his business” “She’s in university. She’s old enough to get married.” “I have a 24-year-old nephew…” “It’s good for young people to socialize”
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V to C: “Conor”
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V to C: “What are you looking at so seriously?”
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V to C: “T-Rex is one of the top agencies. You don’t look to happy for someone who just got a card from such a company.”
C to V: “If you look at it a little differently, it’s just one card.” “Simon’s talking with them about our demo CD… It won’t be too late to celebrate after a decision’s been made.”
V to C: “hmm…”
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V to C: “Anyway~~~” “If things work out well, and you get to make a debut, you owe it all to me, okay? I arranged things so you could go on that stage.” “Later on, when you get to make your debut and hold a concert, pay me back with concert tickets.”
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V to C: “I want front row tickets! Wow, your own concert! Just the thought makes me feel so excited!”
C (IM): “Veronica…”
V to C: “I can’t wait! You’re gonna look so cool, playing the guitar on stage! Seeing you on stage will be compensation in it self.”
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C (IM): “Sometimes she looks like Simon.” “… I can’t find the right words exactly… but they’re both so much like puppies…”
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V to C: “…It does feel a bit lonely after all… It’s like revealing my favorite little hidden restaurant to the public if you know what I mean…”
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V to C: “But… sooner or later you’ll become really famous.” “You’ll perform on even bigger stages, and be loved by more and more people… you have the talent, Conor…”
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V to C: “So don’t worry. No matter where or how you make your debut, you’ll be the best guitarist ever.”
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V to C: “I talk too much, huh?”
C (IM): “I always feel so much better after talking to Veronica.” “I’m grateful for her friendship.”
C to V: “Yeah, it’s true.”
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S: “…”
V to C: “Hey, that was mean~”
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Sex scene between C and S.
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Moaning
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Back to the event
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S to K: “I didn’t hear that Kiev.” “Even if you and Conor are on bad terms, keep your personal and business affairs separate.”
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K to S: “… I don’t care what you think… I’m not the only one to point out that Conor has no talent.” “I’ve just started working in this industry. Do you think it’s up to me to decide who to scout? It was the chief of T-Rex’s idea to scout you and nobody else.”
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K to S: “How about being a bit more honest? Faith and love, I get all that. But… you’re not satisfied performing on small club stages are you?” “You want to get to the big stage, right? You want to sing in front of more people, right? If so…
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K to S: “You have to leave the burdensome branches behind…”
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Sex scene again
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C to S: “Ahh…! Simon…! Simon…!” “Slowly…” “Augh…! It Hurts…!” and more moaning
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C to S: “Ahh…! It Hurts…!” “Wait..!” “Augh!!”
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Moaning
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C to S: “…I didn’t mean…you should pull out all together.” Did I…hurt your feelings? Simon…”
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C to S: “Sorry, let’s do it again, taking it slowly…” “Huh?” “What are you doing?” “Uh…?!”
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C to S: “Hey! You’ll hurt yourself! Augh…!Ugh…!”
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S: “Urk!”
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C to S: “Simon”
C (IM): “Why is he in such a hurry?”
And more moaning
30. – 32.
More moaning
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C to S: “Simon…” “We’ll always be together right?” “We’ll always be together just like we are now, right?”
S to C: “…Conor…”
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S to C: “I’m not leaving…” “I’m…not going…anywhere…Conor…!”
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S to C: “I’m gonna cum…ahhh”
C to S: “me, too…!”
Plus more moaning
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Moaning
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At the office of the boss of T-Rex.
BT= Boss of T-Rex
TS= Talent scout
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BT to TS: “Great.” “Blonde hair and blue eyes. Handsome, with fair skin and a nice voice.” “Where do you keep finding these kids, chief~?”
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TS to BT: “I can bet you that he’ll be a bigger star than Tamara.
BT to TS: “Tamara? How can you compare him with a negro like her~”
TS to BT: “Haha. Tamar’s not as popular as she used to be, but she’s still quite a star.”
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BT to TS: “But the colored ones have their limits. Come to think of it, it’s impressive how you came to find a “thing” like that.” “Philanthropy… Is that what it was?” “I’m quite happy that she’s bringing me so much money. I never saw that coming…”
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BT to TS: “…By the way…” “Where are the other members’ resumes? The guitarist… Drummer…”
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TS to BT: “You only need to see the vocal.” “The guitarist in particular… as an expert I can say that he has fancy techniques, but the skills of a child.”
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BT: “Hmm…”
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BT to TS: “Is that so… I guess you have better ears than I do, chief.” “Alright, the. Bring me a draft of the contract. All the usual terms, understand?”
TS to BT: “Yes of course.”
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The talent scout is in his car and talks with the woman he has an affair with on his phone (headset). There are no other characters.
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“Yes, sweetheart. The purchase contract for that second villa.” “You signed it? Haha, That’s great. I really wanted to buy that house.”
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“Just wait a bit. When I’m done with this project, I’ll be done with my wife and my work, as well.” “It’ll be just the two of us in that villa. Sounds good, huh?”
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“I have a successor who’s really obedient, so the transition will be quite smooth…” “That’s right, Kiev. The redhead we had dinner with the other day.” “He’s quite skilled and ambitious. He’s quick. He’s been doing a good job supporting me with this project.”
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“The boss…She’s given full responsibility of scouting, so there’s nothing to worry about.” “The guitarist and the bassist… they were quite good. What a shame… Oh I was just talking to myself. Never mind.”
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“What should we do with the rest of the money? Get a new car?” “No you’re supposed to use up all the suspicious money as soon as you can.” “Of course. By whatever you want. Yeah, I love you, too.”
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That’s the whole text of ch. 33. I’m going to post the script for ch. 34 on Monday.

Standard disclaimer:
This is a script for ch. 32. You can use it to read the raws. There should be a link somewhere in the comments but I don't want to search for it or check if parts of the chapters weren't uploaded.
I read the English version you can find here: https://www.lezhin.com/en/comic/darkheaven
and I don't want read spoilers from the Korean version. This is my favourite webcomic and I'm going to stop with the scripts immediately and delete every script I posted if somebody spoiles the story for me in a reply.
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C=Conor
S=Simon
G= Gale
P= Pete
B=Benny
IM= inner monologue

The numbers stand for the panels with text. So "1." means the first panel in which a character says or thinks something. "2." the second and so on.
First scene:
Conor comes home
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C: "It's Simon singing. He's back early"
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C to S: "You ordered a curry-burrito, an onion-flavored hot dog, and spicy shrimp noodles, right?"
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S to C: "Welcome home, Conor~"
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C to S: "You've already written so much! I should get on with the lyrics, too~"
S to C: "Take your time. I'm still trying out some stuff. For this part...listen and tell me which one sounds better."
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C (IM): "...Normally, he'd make a big fuss and ask me to compliment him." "He does seem gloomy. I guess he can't help it"
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C (IM): "Did something happen at the funeral, I wonder? I can't ask, just in case it's something sensitive"
S to C (while eating): "Thith part'th the new recording. It'th low hummin, but you can thtill hear it, righth?"
C (IM): "If he would just let it out that he's feeling gloomy, it'd be easier to ask..."
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C (IM): “His voice…”
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C (IM): “…His stepmother…” “He never spoke about his family, so I don’t know what’s going on for sure...even if they weren’t close they were still family…”
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C (IM): That’s why…your voice sounds so sad. Am I right, Simon?”
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Flashback to the funeral. Simon’s fighting with Gale.
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G to S: “Are you happy now, brother?” “Are you happy with what you’ve done?!”
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G to S: “How dare you turn up here. Did father tell you to come? You two are so revolting.” “Oh. Is it the insurance you’re after?” “I don’t have a dime to spare for you, so get lost.”
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S to G: “Stop talking nonsense!” “Dad didn’t tell me to come, and I’ve never even thought about the insurance money!”
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S to G: “You’re a disgusting human being, so you must think that everyone else is, too.” “I only came here to serve my last duty as a member of this family.”
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G to S: “Duty..?” “Did you say “duty”, brother?”
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G to S: “What a load of bullshit from a cowardly bystander like you.” “Mothers dead because of you, you damn hypocrite”
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Back to the scene between Simon and Conor.
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C to S: “Why’s the song still titled “Dark Heaven”? Wasn’t that a working title?”
S (IM): “Why did he say I was cowardly...? He never even needed my help…”
C to S: Well, a lot of debut songs are named after the band, so we can keep this title. Don’t you think?”
S (IM): “What was I supposed to do, Gale? You hated me so much! We were only family in name! My real family…”
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C to S: “You’re listening to me, right?” “The lyrics should be about the church, which was our first hideout, like we said before. It goes well with the title…Are you listening, Simon?”
S (IM): “But what did he mean, I was the one that killed her…I heard she was suffering from depressions after having issues with father. And that’s why she committed suicide..”
C to S: “Hey” “Hey” “…”
S (IM): “I didn’t even know she was depressed. He was just saying that to get in my nerves, right?”
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C to S: “Simon...Do you want me to suck your dick?”
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Happy dancing chibi Simons are chanting “Suck! Dick! Suck! Dick!”
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Pete meets with people (other criminals) he knows. The guy with the beard is the head of the group and called Benny
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B to P: “Look who’s here. It’s the evil most wanted criminal, Pete. How’s it going?”
P B: “Hey, I don’t even wanna talk about it. All my underlings were allotted to other fellas, you know that? Feels like I’m a goner.”
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B to P: “But you haven’t been on the police’s radar these days, have you?”
P to B: “Nope, so I got some B-list work to do.” “I’m so pissed, I been taking it out on homos and beating them up. This ain’t hardly a life.”
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B to Pete: “If it’s so bad, why don’t you come work on our team?”
P to B: “You think I’ll follow your orders, jerk?” I’m gonna get my power back. Who do you think I am? You ridiculous piece of shit.”
B to P: “Not my orders the HQ’s orders. If you want your underlings back, you gonna have to prove yourself to those higher up, you know?”
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P to B: “All you’re team’s doing is stalking. How am I supposed to prove myself by doing somethin’ like that?” “There are so many refugee assholes roaming around the streets that need a good beating to get enlightened. You know what I’m doing for this country…”
B to P: “Stop bluffing. I know you can’t afford to be picky right now. You came to me because you ran out of money, didn’t ya?”
P: “…”
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We see a screen with a picture of Simon and Conor having sex
B to P: “Hey Pete. I’m letting you join the team ‘coz you’re my friend.” “All we gotta do is go around stalking this gay guy, and make a monthly report. It’s that easy, and the client ain’t missed a payment once.” “Word’s spread that we get the easy requests, so there are some guys out there that wanna take it from us.”
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B to P: “ It’s a bit disgusting when I’m putting together the files from the hidden camera, I admit.. But now that I seen them for a couple years, I almost kinda like the guys now.” “But I don’t know why those fags don’t just use their energy to get girls in the sack. KEKEKE”
P (IM): “That black-haired guy.. I’ve seen him before somewhere…”
(P realizes who it is)
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P: “Hey. Move!”
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P to B: “Benny. Is this the guy you been following around? Is this his photo?”
B to P: “Yeah, why? You know him?”
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P: “Ha..HAHA!” “What kinda shitty coincidence is this!”
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Back to Simon and Conor. Conor gives Simon that blow job he offered him earlier. (They guys who stalk them also see it)
30.
S to C: “Conor!!”
31.
Simon is moaning.
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S to C: “Keep going...” “It feels good…Ah…”
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Back to Pete
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P to B: “You’re just stalking him? Not beating his face in or sharing these photos with his co-workers or anything like that?” “It’d be fun to harass the blonde one and make the black-haired one watch.” “How about we beat the living shit out of him and chuck him naked on to a busy street?”
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B to P: “…? So it is someone you know.” “The orders from HQ are to stalk him and send the data once a month. That’s all. The client doesn’t want to go any further than that just yet, so they told us to be careful.”
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B to P: “From what I’ve heard the client is some sort of tycoon.” “I don’t know why someone like that would ask us to stalk some fag, though.”
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Back to Conor giving Simon a blow job.
36.-41.
Simon moaning.
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Back to Pete and Benny
42.
B to P: “You’re makin’ me nervous… Hey, make sure you don’t do anything to get in our way.” “You’re not allowed to teach them a lesson yourself or let them know what’s going on. Got it? … What does he have to do with you, anyway? Why’re reacting like this?”
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P to B: “We just…” “ We share some good old memories.”
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P to Benny (the speech bubble directly above the panel): “So…I always hoped I’d get to see him one more time..”
S: “Huff” “Huff”
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S to C: “…Thanks”
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That’s the whole text of ch. 32. I’m going to post the script for ch. 33 tomorrow.

I think the purpose of the current arc is to make Seungbae suspect Bum as well.
He's been confused by Bum's behaviour for quiet a while now. Whenever he met Bum during this arc he always asked himself at some point why Bum acted like this. He also can't get rid of the feeling that he's missing something.
And now the person who should be just another victim wrote down so much about Sangwoo. Maybe he even wrote something that'll make him look like the obsessed stalker he used to be.
Remember how the friends of the girl told him about Sangwoo but not that Bum was also with them? Now Seungbae has a name and a face to show them. And with that he would also have proof that Sangwoo lied when he claimed that they didn't go on dates because they wanted to keep their relationship a secret.
It's also possible that Bum thinks of that night as their first date and he wrote that down.
I think that once he sees how much Bum knows about Sangwoo and discovers that Bum was with Sangwoo the night the girl died he'll figure out that Bum is more than just another victim.

Yes, it's up on Lezhin. It was really just a one week break.
Now the reaction:
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AHHHHHHHH. WHAT DID BUM WRITE?
Why was Seungbae so shocked?! I have to know. I have to know it NOW (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ .