This is not a ground breaking plot like some comments said but it's not terrible either.
I do believe it gets dragged for too long (made me quit at around ch 80 but then I came back to finish it). It would have been a more enjoyable read if it were shorter. Perhaps it could also have simplified the plot too.
As it is, it's a bit too complicated "for nothing" imo because the "plot twists" weren’t that surprising. I'm not saying I could have guessed the plot, but just that it was in line with the story. "The manor is cursed! Actually she made a pact! But he did too! And then she did another! And that’s why they were stuck". It just gives a feeling of trying to make it complicated to cover up the lack of depth.
We see a lack of depth in the story, world building, but also the relationships. They're all kind of shallow, they're just not that well written imo. Their obsession for each other is too easy, and the child just does a 180 in one chapter when he learns the truth about his uncle. Likewise we saw a glimpse of the brother's child version but it got dismissed to be replaced by a more simple minded and obsessive brother with impure love.
Honestly I really like that little knight dude. He's funny and as we go on he actually cares about her. It seems like he notices how unfairly she's treated while also acknowledging how flawed she is.
I know she's obsessed with the pretty dude though. But I'm not sure there'd be a happy ending for them
To be honest, I wish there was a manga that you think "oh side character, he cute and caring" and boom its a character the mc can date. I get the whole main character look better than anyone else but what wrong with just a simple look like the knights. He cute, I like him better than the Duke anyway.
Yeah that's so true. I don’t know any webtoon like that. There's some that get isekaid into a novel and fall in love with a character who died early or with the 2nd male lead, but they're always characters with male lead qualities and in many of them if not all, they're better than the "real ML" anyway.
Damn I'm rooting for my little knight
Great slow burn romance with an adorable cast of characters. I'm happy with the end ship, Natsumin is absolutely great and I like that Sunao isn’t half hearted about his feelings. I also love how the story highlights precious relationships even after breaking up. Sometimes a friendship just means that much.
I only have two critiques.
One, the pace was a bit too slow toward the end when the triangle was stuck. They all realized their feelings but spent 10 years just doing nothing.
Second, the ending felt rushed. The time skip was crazy. I'm totally fine with the body swap theory, to me that makes sense. It was over as quickly as it started. It is a supernatural phenomenom afterall. BUT the fact we only got a quick hug from the couple after 105 chapters and then a skip to Lemon oversea being happy is offputting. No reward for the slow burn we read for 105 chapters.
I'm hoping there will be some extras to make up for this.
Ch 104 is so gross to me lol. When Isidore drinks water he has some on his mouth it looks like he drooled. Then Deborah drinks from his hands which is weird as fuck in real life. Is she a bird? And then she also has water dripping from her mouth although now it looks like cum. Anyway I really didn’t find it romantic at all rofl
It's a cute story but the little end-of-the-world-war was soooo boring. It's a trend lately for romance webtoons to add fantasy-adventure with a "big villain". It's always poorly written though. Seriously the aunt was just like "grr grr revive my friend! Argh! Kill empress! Oh no! I guess I was wrong I regret it. Anyway I'm dead now". No depth lol.
But apart from that I liked the characters a lot!









I wish Aileen was chubby like her dragon form... she was so cute as a dragon, but as a human she's so not Aileen-like imo
Youre so real for that
Chubby aileen would be so faqin cute.
that would make so much sense. every time her human form appears, it seems like a different person