I feel like there were other directions this story could've gone. Like the ml acting a little detached because he's in his head a lot or maybe pretending to be okay for a while until it comes out during an argument or something. That would've been normal because feeling anxious happens quite often in relationships. The author ruined the ml when he was the "perfect-imperfect" boyfriend.
Thank fuck, it's finally over!!! I really couldn't take anymore of this shit
Is there a good reason as to why that fucker (Grayson) gets his own story? I can't, for the life of me, fathom why that would be.
I need someone to tie me up and keep me from this book please
Preferably someone with a gun because what do you mean I need to wait for more
The concept in itself isn't terrible. The timing of revealing such a "power" is what doesn't fit well. The plot was already a mess, but now it's just messier. I laugh humourlessly at all the new chapters.
But the whole conversation felt like the author was pressured into writing it because readers were really unimpressed with the direction in which the story was going
It was so half-baked.
In all my years of reading, I have come across the most ridiculous plots ever written, but this one? This one takes the cake
