Pretty disappointed by the tone of this chapter. The chapters before this had a pretty dark tone but now we have random sex “jokes” added for whatever reason.
I would have preferred if we lingered longer on what Mokyeon actually did to himself and not pass it over just to continue the story. If the author is not able to resolve an arc like this and address the self harm and the serious things they added then don’t bring them up at all.
Willing to hope for improvement but a bit disappointed nevertheless
Give us 40 more chapters and more body hair shots :( why do these stories always only have so few chapters. At this point it’s like none generic characters/ fun designs = short stories. It somehow the most toxic generic asshats get 100+ chapters………
I am really trying with this one. The art and the idea of the story are exactly what I am looking for but there are just so many parts that feel disconnected. I think a scene continues and suddenly we get teleported to a completely different location and setting. Things happen but it doesn’t feel like we are taken along with the characters thoughts and actions very well. From what I understand the novel is really great and I am happy to hear that but so far the drawn version is pretty lacking and should not need people in the comments supplementing information or parts that are missing here.
I think it's probably better to just read the novel. When I checked the comments, a lot of people seemed to say that it's really good and has way more details. A lot is apparently lost in the manhwa.
Hey there I’ve read the novel and tbh it is good but it is tooooo long. There’s a lot of MC’s internal monologue and philosophy and just him talking tohimself and overthinking things. Smut scens are greatly and in great detail described so if that’s your cup of tea you’d like it. Other than that the plot is very slow the chapters very long and nothing is really happening much. The whole art / gallery subplot isn’t that much revolutionary and unique and intriguing. Main drama and interest comes from the MC and his switch to omega and the ML’s feelings and actions about it all. I understand why manhwa seems abrupt to you, but trust me you’re not missing anything. Because this all happens in novel, just way way wayyyyy slower
To add, if you’re familiar with Eighteen’s Bed manhwa and novel, this is very similar in narration - ultra slow novel with infinite MC’s thoughts about everything and anything.
Overall I really like the art, characters and world building a lot. The story had a good flow and the chemistry between the main characters was really nice but then the last 5 chapters really dropped the ball for me.
SPOILERS FROM HERE
Too much happens too fast and the betrayal/pseudo incest/ SA/ drug chapters was just so incredibly unnecessary and had no build up besides wind dude liked the guy, randomly goes crazy and somehow (???) was in cahoots with the bad guy? Idk with more build up it might have been something but for me it really destroyed the ending.
You put it very well.
I truly think this had potential but was slapped together too sloppily *sigh*
People have been mentioning the novel and I also really want to read it but the sites I found are flooded with ads. I does anyone know where I can buy the ebook (specifically in EU)? I have been looking everywhere and haven’t had any look with a pdf or ebook :(
dl and check on webnovel app ( ﾟーﾟ)
The novels can be purchased in August, Z library and also oceanofpdf has the novels for free with no ads
Do you want a pdf? I can share the gdrive link if you want
Can I have it pls! (≧∀≦)
Hello I messaged you regarding the pdf file. Do check it in your inbox if you have time
Sorry for the super late reply! I found the novel on the webnxvel app so I could read it and omg it’s amazing! I wish I could have bought it though the author is absolutely worth supporting. Such a refreshing and interesting story!
So tired of this plot, especially since the bottom is once again a naive, doe eyed guy who has never had sex and well the top is the usual abusive toxic red flag
Honestly why not make this plot with a scheming bottom who knows what he’s getting into because idk consent is a lot hotter than the constant sexual assault and whining?
Cuz authors have no morals.
Ikr he's so dumb
And when he started crying I was like eww so cringe
Did he trip on the heaviest and unmovable stone to ever exist? I understand that they wanted this scene but it honestly made me cackle when they showed him trip over a pebble and that somehow destroyed his toenail to the point it bled and have to be removed
lmfao my thoughts exactly!!!!
it happened to me once so I believe it . Not a pebble, just a random rock
The art is soooo nice, which makes me doubt that this will be a long series sadly, but very happy to be proven wrong
Thank you so much for all the updates! This is such a great story and I’m eating up all the new chapters
And another good story has fallen victim to „create conflict but can’t resolve conflict“ also known as author writing themselves into a hole
What a shame it was so good until now but I hate that confinement and rape bullshit so much