beta
im sorry but who, it's frying me the fuck out
characters are hot, but the pacing's way too fast? I mean, you can put in that flowerpots are susceptible to hot giant men looking like they're on a contest to see which one's more of a yaoi fridge so they're easier to 'harvest' but there was none of that LMAOOO
Instead, we get "you wanna know?" and immediately starts sucking the guy's clearly unable to resist a giant muscular fuck three times his mass at the mouth
I get being horny but think of the PLOT, not just have it, THINK of IT more than with your dick
It's frustrating when we have shit like this that have fire in it but it fails to execute properly
who out in here making a blonde mommy stilettos hunk with a son that should've been named something else since he's serving man tiddies but then we don't get proper plot hello
this shit had me going chapter 1 and 2 for 5 minutes wondering if dad turned into a kid or was out of the picture and kid became a gangster or some shit because their hair color switched and im just like.. ???? wtf who does this type of shit though like im up in here already confused and then we get the amazing porn logic from a DAD so like I was deadass fried reading even with my brain turned off