and this is the last chapter available... at such a moment.... brother i can't do this i'm gonna shrivel up and die if i don't see the next chapter soon
the whole story is so... frustrating. like it's been 5 chapters and i don't even enjoy reading it. i can't imagine how the pretty guy can turn out to be nice later on?? at this point i doubt it would pay off in the end, i'll just find something else to read #－.－)
slowburn but it's slow just cuz both of them are idiots
It’s giving Systematic Error levels of slow
cringe dialogue, mischaracterization... i don't know what i expected honestly. product of "tall male model yaoi of the patch" brainrot.
neuviwrio pet play could've been so good but ppl fumble their character dynamic all the time by fitting them into typical yaoi boxes. disappointed but not surprised.
atp just create original smut bro they would not fucking say that (/sp meme ref)
its a oneshot dj bro you dont have to act like a critic… and i dont get what you mean by fumble their char dynamic cus what r u expecting with pet play smut??? do you expect neuvillette to start busting out judicial terms during sex or something
no i don't expect neuvi to talk about his job during sex. i'm just saying that this is low tier smut that doesn't do the characters any justice. pet play CAN be done well, while keeping the characters intact. this one does not. be normal about people who don't share your opinion, would you. way too defensive and of what?
Author did say that the characters are ooc. But I agree with you a bit
me when. me when the child makes single father realize that he likes the other person too........
only got to appear properly in the end... and even that is with another guy...... childhood friend L.. many such cases
i'm happy that kinky stuff is making a comeback after so long (because it fucking SUCKS when people are practicing bdsm when not in a relationship but after discovering feelings they suddenly only do vanilla sex since it's more fitting for "love" or whatever) but i'm definitely not happy about the reason WHY it's making a comeback. i wish it wasn't tied to his triggers and was just something consensual both of them enjoyed. hope they can work towards that
I agree, but it was inevitable that it'd be tied to his triggers considering he kept suppressing his urges and not even acknowledging them within himself. He went from abuse and indulgence to -> abrupt denial and now he's hit his limit masking that part of him. Idk if the author plans on eventually giving me an actual opportunity to develop where he's not on one of two extremes, but I hope we could see that!
Like, just admitting that his bdsm urges don't stem from the healthiest experiences, but he still wants to practice it and discuss it with Yu so they can agree on some limita etc.. Ahh one can dream!