I just binge read the chapters and honestly, there's a lot to unpack...
First of all...the pacing is abysmal, and the progression is incredibly rushed.
We're not even properly introduced to any of the characters or world development...we know a bit, but that bit doesn't seem to be expanded on adequately.
So many plot holes so far, and the way it's going...I honestly don't think any of those holes are going to be filled.
Power system is repetitive asf, there aren't any unique abilities and I still haven't grasped how the abilities work even after 18 chapters.
Honestly, I feel like the author is just doing practise with this one, because there are so many ways it would have been better if not for how rushed everything is...
Also, this may not be a problem for others, but there are ALREADY hints of tacky, slop romance. (It's hopefully going to be one sided and not the focus of the story in the slightest)
Still...I don't think a rating of 7.7 is fair, I'd actually give it a lot higher for hopes things get better.
I'll keep my eye out for this one though, in hopes things improve... but I wouldn't keep my fingers crossed.
I'd rate it a solid 8.3 but I'm going to put five stars just cuz I want to bump up the ratings a bit.
Another awesome chapter! Yoo hoo!
Also guys, I've written fanfiction of Eugene X Galfredick on Ao3 so if you wanna check it out, here's the link;
https://archiveofourown.org/works/85742736
If you're looking for the smut scenes, it's going to be in chapter 4.









This shit is too fuqin hilarious
Like wth am I even doing with my life wasting my braincells on this shi? (In all love)