Sorry, I can’t keep reading. The plot is interesting and the story development is good, but HOW does the ML’s face look so dumb? Please, artist… can’t you make him look at least a little smarter? Every time I saw his face, I instantly lost the motivation to keep reading.
I understand where you are coming from.
If you want to see a dumb looking mc I suggest looking at "A Paramour".
MC had such a stupid surprised expression with his mouth open, that it was all i could focus on. I had to drop it. I just dont understand why the character was drawn that way.
the art may be okay for others. I know that i dont enjoy reading it. ITs a pity as it may be quality.
I havent read enough to rate it objectively - would be unfair to do so.
Please have some sympathy for the Beta top boy. Children who are abused at a young age often grow up to be violent, and in this case, the Beta boy turned out that way. And the Alpha/ uke who started it first. The Alpha in this story is a lonely playboy who goes through many lovers and sees it as normal, so he believes he’s the one facing karma.
Tried to keep going until chapter 20. This story is complete trash. Such a disgusting character. If people can watch someone kill innocent kids and still keep waiting for character development, there’s something wrong with them.
1. In a plot structure, we're still in the exposition aka beginning.
2. If the lack of morality in a fictional setting upsets u to no end, congratulations for leaving.
3. There might be something wrong with them but theres also something wrong with you via pointing fingers and calling people that theyre wrong. Be better, leave quietly if u have nothing nice to say esp to pther people.
To be fair, the state of the world is so awful, death is probably not that bad in this case.
But back on the morality topic, well it"s fiction, thats the only reason. On a similar level, the yakuza/mafia stories have always been a popular trope and the seme are very often just as bad.
They dont usually have killed children, but killing innocent people isnt really any better.










Artist, you’ve got serious talent. You should use your skills on a different subject instead. Dang, this is so sick.