It's too... cringe? is that the word? for me. The instant she started talking I dipped.
I don't think you guys need to worry much about the age gap, it's most likely 3-5 years. He looks like a teen in the first chapters while Asha looks like a preteen. We can see that with the way the red-haired brother (Liam?) is drawn later in the timeskip. Assuming the "coming-off" that was mentioned in the few last chapters is 18, then Asha must be around the age of 17.
Maybe it's because the way these characters are written, but while I'm not that attached to them, the plot is appealing and has immense potential. However with the fast pacing and timeskips, I think it's going to be a little over the place despite that.
Asha has some character development after she grew up, which I appreciated. The way she countered Eden's self-poisoning was brutal and honest, making him see that his actions hurt the people he cared about, and that they indeed have consequences. Some people may say it was idiotic to poison herself in the same way he was doing so to himself, but I think it's a great way to bring him back to reality.
The introduction of "River" threw me off. It wasn't introduced properly, and anyone would think they have skipped a few chapters because of that. It's just not well-written, and frankly very poorly handled.
The art is great, it's what drew me in in the first place.
While my review may be a little lopsided, I indeed genuinely enjoyed reading it. It's not by any means horrendous, it's just a little rushed and I would have definitely liked more for the timeskip to come much later on in the story.
Definitely a ★★½☆☆ from me.
good storyline and mentally strong fl.
in this list, you'll see more of a 'mentally strong women', which means smart, cunning, calculative and quick wicked.
i hate it when a 30 yrs old woman gets reincarnated as a 5 yrs old and acts like a baby + extra hate when they have a crush on a 5 yrs old so i'll try my best to not add those weird ass stories and instead add tolerable ones
i delete many of the stories i add later on if they become boring etc. even if they have a strong fl <3
The art is what drew me the most in this manhwa. The colours, the lines, the character designs — the ML is beautiful, the FL is gorgeous, and I absolutely devoured the panels with them together.
Unfortunately, the visual appeal did not translate to the story itself.
Abrupt change of scenarios and conversations. Racism with the darkening appearance of the possessed ML. The characters felt boring as if they were created solely around tropes.
However, of course we are here for the protagonists since they're the ones telling the story.
I'm pretty sure ML has a bipolar disorder at this point. He's hot then he's cold, the whole repressed and strained male love interest was not handled well. Little to no character development.
FL on the other hand, I think she's a little more developed, though she's not the kind of protagonist I necessary will recommend to anyone. Vain, close-minded, I would say even ridiculous in some sense. I did not enjoy her, I will be honest.
Best character so far is the ML's sister — the 'original' female protagonist. She knows what she wants, learns to stand up for herself, and knows her own worth. She could be written better for such strong characteristics, alas, she had the misfortune of being written in a one dimensional fantasy romance manhwa.
As I always say, you can read it so you can make your own opinions about it. My words are not set in stone for anyone, though I would personally not recommend this.
Any title(s) falling under food
Characters who are working with food
ChefHouse CookBakerPatisserie, etc.
Stories about restaurants, bar, bakery, etc
Characters who love food, Critics, Gourmet
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MU - MANGA UPDATES
AP - ANIME PLANET
BL FOOD GA/HWA/HUA List:
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FOOD MANGA List:
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CURRENTLY UNDER CONSTRUCTION P4+
Chapter 37, just no. You don't warn the women in your life by attempting to demonstrate the act of sexual assault. Jill went from being a attractive golden-retriever male lead to a complete unattractive jackass in the span of a panel. Fuck you and your male ego.