Way to many flashbacks for the start of the story makes the flow feel choppy
Really? Then we'd have similar people to yourself complaining about how everything wasn't explained right at the beginning if that didn't happen.... Haizzzz....
I’m not complaining I’m just giving my constructive criticism. Your example is stupid and has nothing to do with my point so I’ll ignore it.
Her hair reminds me of that romcom scene where the male lead rubs cum in Cameron Diazs hair and pretends it’s Vaseline
what the heck? HAHAHAHA
wait whaaaaa
wait wot
I feel violated. I feel regret. I feel personally attacked. The author took their thumb and wiped dookie over my top lip and laughed at me for giving this story a chance. This one deserves a 1 star ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOO
This is the type female lead that better female lead isekai romance writers make fun of. Our FL is “perfectly imperfect”, the evolved Mary Sue.
Plan ahead with panel layouts and storyboard your work. The comic comes off like someone just decided to wing it.
At least we won’t be dealing with a overthinking angsty FL