Gave me everything I need and love in 13 short chapters. i shouldn't cut onions so close to bedtime╥﹏╥
This is as good of a plot as a story full of smut can have.
The Fluff level and misunderstandings were juuuuuust right. Baby Bear approved
Made it to ch 38 and Im realizing now its Taewook I dont care for. He's too passive and impartial to everything going on. He doesn't have much dialog, inner or outer. It just feels like he has no autonomy outside of deciding he wants to fight.
Maybe it's because the story is following Minchan and mainly from his POV, but we dont really ever see Taewook existing as a person. He does whatever anyone tells him to do as long as it's not to stop fighting. He's not trying to when a title, make omega boxers a norm, hell even open a gym or start an omega league. He's just there to be Minchan's object of obsession. He's not even pining back. There's literally nothing to root for.
Even if this does end in babies, Its just not hitting the way I want it to
i agree with you. honestly, i don’t think he’s had much meaningful development. even after the main story ended and the side stories started focusing more on him, he still feels like a blank slate to me. i can’t get attached to him because it feels like he barely has a defined personality. he’s just... there. what makes it more disappointing is that even with his point of view, it still doesn’t reveal much about who he actually is. he barely has any inner monologue, so as readers, we never really get the chance to understand him on a deeper level. even if the people around him in the story don’t understand him, we should at least be able to, but the writing never gives us enough to work with. by the end of the main story, i expected both of them to have grown individually and as a couple. instead, even in the side stories, it still feels like nothing has really changed. i struggle to understand their relationship because taewook’s actions don't fully support what the story is trying to tell us. i just wish his character had more emotional depth and expression because, as it is, i can’t really connect with him. i really wanted the story to give him more focus. ☹
*more on them
Agreed
Omg yes!!! I didnt even realize when the main story ended and the side story began! I dont know if the author was trying to go for a man of few words or mysterious but they left us with nothing
And it's seriously driving me crazy because everyone BUT Taewook has so much depth. I need to know what they were trying to accomplish
Yeah, I agree with you. This is the tone for the entire story, unfortunately.
I have to agree. I do wish we had seen more of a character development for him. It feels like Minchan has been carrying the story by himself as the main character and the MC is just... well, there!
Lmao I know so many people irl like this it’s crazy. I’m not friends w them ofc but once u start to be a bit more observant u kinda wanna protect the little peace u have inside u in order to not go crazy about these sorts of traits. I see this type of impartiality in very introverted people tbh
And you are so right with your statement. He's just a doormat to Minchan's stupid whims. I would have preferred Taewook be the MC rather than Minchan. Taewook, as the only omega boxer in the league, literally has alot of lore to develop on. I need some lore about him that doesn't include Minchan at all.
22 ch in amd I'm fighting the urge to skip ahead 20 chapters. He's so full of himself and not in the cute, toxic, yandere way either. The bottom is also kinda irra since he's just letting the top think and do as he pleases.
Just a few chapters, the rest are really nice!
Made it to ch 38 and Im realizing now its Taewon I dont care for. He's too passive and impartial to everything going on. He doesn't have much dialog, inner or outer. It just feels like he has no autonomy outside of deciding he wants to fight.
This was an emotional roller-coaster and I am happy thr ending was so cliche. I hope the side stories are filled w fluff.
The only thing to get me this worked up was Pearl Boy
Pearl boy was actually good because the top wasn’t abusive
So it was good becasue there was no Domestic violence????? The obsessive coercion, abuse, and prostitution of a mother and son isnt heavy and emotionally taxing???
Nerves of steel buddy
I was just talking about ML and MC relationship, idk why you started being up other shit lmfao
My original post was about me being emotionally distraught because of angst. YOU changed the subject and brung up other shit. Either wish for fluff in the side stories w me or just stfu
Its giving Mr. A's farm
Omg yes
I had flashbacks to that. I really hated how they spent so much time hyping up K's trauma and then just being like "oh, that's just his chicken side and he made scrambled eggs after embracing them." It was such a tonal dissonance--plus the series was really weird for having characters tell Little A "Hey, I went through this traumatic experience due to being a beast man, but I'm safe here" and Little A just traumatizes them more.