does anyone else feel like the pacing of this is AMAZING up until the second chapter? I love the story, but I couldn’t help but feel like I was reading a new book after the first chapter. there were so many time jumps & moments where the story felt like filler. I wish they went a different direction & focused more on the main characters and their relationship. still a good story & the build up was great! so glad I gave it a try after months of it sitting on my tbr shelf ♡
season* not chapter!
I love this website but sometimes I struggle with feeling like the same story is being recycled non stop. tons of smut ( not that I mind) & no depth or plot. I’m glad I stumbled across this gem. perfect length, amazing story & perfect chemistry!!! so glad I read this (▰˘◡˘▰)
may be the odd one out but man. something exciting and new in this porn fest of a website. not that I’m tucking anyone’s yum ( and I too partake in my fredeaky activities) but an actual PLOT. I love this already. someone needs to make a list of stories like this please & ty.
side note, I’ll take the dad for myself. thanks.
someone who read the novel PLEASE tell me if they end up together this will be my biggest heartbreak if they don’t. I know we still have a long ways to go but I need to know.
I heard from someone who read it before that they do end up together and that she also runs away from him to make him look for her the way she did
Lmfao
Good make him suffer for making her go crazy looking for him
interesting concept, sloppy execution. the main character has no personality except for being a whiny pathetic little brat. I get her having to cope with certain things, but this was 33 chapters of me screaming “ girl stand the fuck up already”. it’s repetitive. both guys are the same sort of man in different fonts. zero actual chemistry. hopefully it gets better at some point but right now it’s just mid.
I’m so angry lol. first of all, the plot and world building was actually pretty interesting. the art was amazing and it’s such a shame that it had to get attached to a story that is 35 chapters full of RAPE.
Such a fucking clear problem with the author. You’re telling me this Psychopath draws the line at hitting women? Never attacks another man? Has every single woman fall in love with what he’s doing? This is clearly the work of a weird lonely man that has nothing better to do with his life. I saw someone comparing this to CNC and I think not enough people are acknowledging the first part of the acronym. CONSENSUAL.
I don’t mind twisted stories but this is gross
1) maybe it’s my autism but the amount of times the whole “ yang” thing has been mentioned is pissing me off. like okay girl damn. we get it.
2) I’m only on chapter like.. maybe 8 but why is it purple
I think its a condom.... many manhwa does it too
my dumbass thought he fucked her raw for some reason
why does the ml always make that weird face where eyes eyes are big & he’s looking down on whoever. I know maybe it’s me being picky, but I can’t stand it lol. the plot is also very repetitive.