just read ch 108, you all you'll be pissed off XD XD XD XD
More the story goes the more I like ML's personality.
Now I know a lot of people will reply "HOW COULD YOU"
Let me explain, I don t get overly emotional toward fictional charactere, of course FL life is horrible, but she is not suffering for real you know she is not real!!
So I like ML because when he goes into full psychotic mode it made me laugh so much XD XD XD Imagine the picture here The guy laughing like a maniac arms wide open saying his monologue that sound like a complet mental breakdown everytime it get me soo hard! Seriously this is comedy XD XD XD XD I don't think I would like the story if he wasn t acting like he does. Oki he did go too far when killing first Fl Lover but again "he didn t die for real!" and ML did give poison to his step mom soooo you see not always a bad things XD XD XD But anyway he made the story worth to read, not the beginning but his character had a sudden glow up with his psychosis at some point and this is perfect XD
I just can't anymore this is always the same thing over and over and over but in the real world and not in a comics.
Guy you knew from the start that story was about an abusif relationship! It didn't appear out of the blue 50+ch later!! You had warning from the very start!! What the he** you decided to read it anyway even if you don't like those type of story???
Because you like Flowers are bait and Merry Psycho? Let me inform you, you may like an author it doesn't mean you ll like every story they make! You don't go reading a story you don't like just because of the other work! This is not Flowers are bait and this is not Merry psycho this is another story!!
There is an infinit ammont of story free for you to read on this website and you ve decided to read one you don't like?? Your thrill is "hating for hating" and this is "real life toxicity"! And like it or not you are not a good public for the story and jump onto "easy conclusion" just to give yourself validation.
Want an example, the "peanut allergy reason" people are like "he is an assh**e because of peanut" and so on...... Yeah sure it s not because his father try to kill him multiple time with his allergic reaction this is because and only because of the peanuts that he is messed up.....Who would be messed up by a parent trying to kill you multiple time! OF course this is the Peanuts!!.........
Isn't a reference of that entire story "if he/she doesn't have a weakness, create one" omg isn t what he learn from his dad, isn t what he is doing to get the girl he likes, omg aren t you all missing the point by sticking on the "peanuts thing" !!!
Seriously at first on this site I was looking the comment section to get an idea of the story, you can t do that anymore because the comment section is always poluted by people who read story they don't like and don't even try to understand what is happening! "This is not a happy ever after story so I'll shit on it even if I read it and can't stop reading it somehow this is not because the suspence is good at all and I will be sure to shit on it at every update there is"
Stop reading things when they aren't your type of story! If you get a clear warning at the beginning you are just being stooopide!!!!
Since the story is just bad I start to reverse the "gender voice in my head" prince have a high pitch voice mini mouse style, duke close to prince but a little lower ton, white hair girl get a deep demonic voice. The story is still bad but now it is funny!
Unpopular opinion I guess, but I feel kind of bad of the "antagonist woman" I mean she is the same as uke, uke even acknoledge that at some point. They both try to survive. The only difference is uke trust seme capability but the "antagonist woman" didn't. And technicly if it was only about Uke and Seme they wouldn't have made it if "antagonist woman" didn't play like she did. I understand she betray Seme and she was a risk for both of them because she was crazy angry about seme leaving her side for uke. But in the end if you as a reader take "uke side" and his want to survive and be free it would be hypocrite thinking that "antagonist woman" get the end she deserved, she had the same want and kind of play the same card as uke, she just use her charm on more than one "pawn" while uke use some manipulation too just not by charming more than seme. I understand that the best ending is "her being in jail" because she help seme and uke the case have a "conclusion" and free she would be a risk for their "peace" it was "them or her" but I can't help myself but feeling bad for her, it is true she did work as hard to get her freedom in the end. Well with that being said I still hope Seme and Uke to live happy ever after!
so now we just have to look for "Seph" update and take the rest as garbage, good to know.
Again and again with the comment section.
People here take a "small part" and want it to justify everything.
This is not the point, stop searching for a "justification for his behavior" most of all because none of you would think anything would be enough to justify his sh**
This was only an explaination about the debt. How did it start, why Naesoo is the one "responsible for the debt" (not that it is justify but what happen for her to get that debt on her back).
omg that story is sooo crazzyyyy everyone in it are fu** top I like it so much omg!!
(Yes I like messy story this is entertainment!!) This author is just crraaazzzyyy omg I like it!!!! can't wait for what's next seriously!!!
A lot of comment are complaining about Micheol and his back story as if it was there to 'trigger some sympathy" toward him. WHAT IF, those flash back are there for us to understand what happen. Aren't you all curious to understand when things go wrong and why and how FL is hurt, why ML have a "plan" and act all shabby around her, how it would really affect Micheol. Sometime seeing about "the bad guy" just help to understand the big picture and the "impact" with "what's next". Why FL did put up with his sh**y behavior, why she lost her trust after getting hurt. Because just "saying it" is not the same than showing it. If it was just arround FL being in relationship with ML there would be no reason for the "plot of the main story" every action would only bring confusion and would seems meaning less, most of you would probably say something like ML should stop his fixation on her ex and tell her the true, FL should just turn the page like it was nothing .. and so on.. So what about we just read the story as it is!?
Seriously this type of story is not my type of story in general. BUT this one really got me, like every chapter I m like oki but.. I need more!! This is the type of story that, if it was complete I would have read it in one go. I can't really explain why, but I enjoy it. I'm curious for what s next, I want to see the development, how the issues for both FL and ML will be resolve, how each character will evolve with their role, I like the "small comedy" and lively atmosphere. Personaly this is a good one for now.
Noooo not the end!!! I want more ┗( T﹏T )┛please let it have some side story!!!
Oki maybe you all saw it already and I am like "OMG REVELATION!" BUT
Just in case!
On the cover picture!!! ML hold a syringe and MC have a dark spot on his wrist!! ML DOES INJECT MC SOMETHING!!!!
ML clearly is the one that want a relationship with MC! (tell himself he need to hold back and all) The rejection at the beginning, I am calling that out, its probably from MC! But this is missleading because we don't see MC "link with the bubble" So the one who is saying that "this is disgusting" is probably MC!! NOT ML!!!
So ML confess, MC rejected, ML drug him and created the memory lost! The accident alone wouldn't guarantee a memory lost! They are working in a pharmaceutical lab! This would explain also why ML feel uneasy with MC choosing a movie that he would found "disgusting" normaly!!
At first the story was nice, the "fight" against the blond girl to take back her position. Then oki fine she climb her way nice. Then oki we understand the "duke and his sons" was on a spell to hate her in previous life and now are regretful. Oki she grew and she is super powerful good good. But now it s only "Her majesty her majesty her majesty her majesty her majjjeeessstttyyyy" like gurl are you with the right ML at this point XD don't get me wrong I would think it is creepy if "her majesty' was the ML but this is no longer being greatful this is obsession XD. THEN FL and ML start their relationship oki oki fine they had a lot to talk about and then...... FL litteraly act like ML is granted and she is like "oh I know he can resist me" like girl your relationship just start ML is full on PTSD of previous life and feel unworthy FL didn't even had the idea in mind until they had their conversation. And now they act as if they both are 2000% into each other, talk about toxic relationship! I understand she need ML to stay alive but the co-dependancy level just took 100 steps further without any clear reason except "ML regreted her dying in previous life and sacrifised his heart". And the story since their night together is just around that so the last chapter is only "oh we spend a night together so (...) since we spend the night with each other (...) and HER MAJESTY!!! sleep together! HER MAJESTY"
I really hope for the story to improve a little bit, because the idea was very good, and yeah even if this was "easy writing everything work well for FL lazy pen author" at least it was interesting to see where it was going! But seriously if we get another chapter with no evolution of the story except for the "spend a night together/HER MAJESTY" thing seriously I don't think I can!! And this is sad because it was really interesting at the beginning.
I don't get the story, there is something that make no sens at all to me...
Prince gave the FL to the Duke "in case her name appear on him" and ask to give her back after one year if the Duke doesn t have her name.
Not even a year have pass and Prince want her back (oki I get it this is because of his obsession) but now it s oki if Duke die??? Why giving her in the first place???
If the prince don't care now why did he care at all at first!???
This story (〜￣△￣)〜 clearly not the best writing ever which is ironic (kinda) since its about a writer (ok my jokes aren t better I agree)
I keep on reading it because you know... it is a light story, the idea behind is kind of good but well, there is some time when I need to just accept things for what they are. For example the 'Horrriiible plan from purple hair to destroy ML by making him say he don't date at the radio mua hahahahaha" ....... Now the twist!! to keep it going!! I'm like oki oki fine let's see what's next you know.
this chapter... MC is clearly indeniably smart... (full on sarcasm)
second ML mom show up, they litteraly tell her "the author of that story" She litteraly reply "oh my son co-write this" and Mc is like "oh no I need to go before she see me" (the mom never sees her before) I mean Girl she knows you are there!! The author of the story her son co-write with! I mean PLEASE! I get it was an excuse for the next scene (to go into that room with Actor) but why!! Why the real author have such a lazy pen!!!! I can't!! This type of things happen multiple time! Each time I brainwash myself a little more! Don't get me wrong I'll keep on reading it as "a light story" but I need to make that critic, this chapter, the level of none sens is just too much!
I won't lie, I got attach to that story but let's say I am now an old woman sooo it doesnt hit like it did when I was younger and full of admiration for love! That age when I was going on full ship over some fictional caracter. I mean probably there is some youngster who catch up that story and goes all for it I don't want to make it a "me" problem but extending that story this much I do wonder if I will ever see the conclusion of it and I m probably not the only one in that boat. Probably a lot of people who was there at its beginning aren t following anymore (you grew up at some point, have a family and take other interest) good for me I am a nerdy old lady who doesn t have a life!! This is the one piece of shojo. Hope I'll get to see the conclusion at some point.. I do like the story don't get me wrong!! But I wonder if the author's "target public" is in fact our grant grant children.
Hello everyone,
Let me teach you about "story line"
Here how ir goes
at first you will get an introduction of the MC and the picture of their everyday life
In those line you will get some explaination about "the issues" the MC will have to deal with until the resolution.
Then other character will be introduce, you ll get some back story at some point if they are important for the story
Then you ll get a few "Mc try this doesn t work Mc try that doesn t work" and so on until some event let them reach the "resolution"
For long stories you may have another issue that will pop up after one get resolve, same process here "try this doesn t work try that doesn t work"
Then you ll get a conclusion. Without any issue there is no story. No conflict to adress mean no story at all.
Keep that in mind, because all I see here is a bunch of critics about the issues when they are necessary. No story ever start with "everything is fine and everything is good then they live happely ever after". None! Never happen, won t ever happen because it would be meaningless!
Can't wait to see where this story goes because it pick my interest!
I look at the comment section every ch. and I just don't get it. The amount of hate I'm like why are you even reading it if this is not your type of story??
People act like emotional masochist, like, what are you even doing?!!
Personaly I enjoy the story!
oki there is that twist thing with MC eating ghost... I was like "wait what? after all this time, with all of this"
I mean that was weird somehow, like, unless MC didn't mention it because he wanted an excuse to keep ML next to him by using him and is lowkey also obsesses that would be mess up but that would be a nice way to explain the F with that "super power" that comes from nowhere!!!
But it would be my only critic and it s about the story line. Because if I was hating the MC or the ML sooooo much to critic them every ch. I mean I would have drop it a long time ago! I mean what are you doing?!!!!!! If you don't like mess up behavior don't read a story with mess up behavior! Or do you all enjoy hating something?? I don't get it!