Something about this annoys me and I can't get into it. The mc is too dumb and cocky. He can never win fights that he willingly walks into and he always get hand outs from the king. The King pissing me off to for some reason. Like the mc is so ass that it's not even funny. Dude needs his hand held for everything. He's always on the verge of death
Idk why when you make some sort of criticism ppl always gotta be aggressive back. Instead of trying to put others down, actually make a defensible argument. you just sound petty and immature.
anyways i get what you mean it’s definitely not one of the worst dungeon manhwas i’ve read but also it feels like fighting with no actual plot. Mc’s definitely not my favorite but the concept around it is nice i guess. There are some points in the story where i’m just like..”why?..” lol. Overall, it’s not bad i think it’s better than most dungeon manhwas out there. From your point/comment it seems like u enjoy mary sue stories more, maybe look into those instead.
He's so arrogant ugh. And everyone if basically naked??? Well it's fine at least I can get some eye candy or whatever. The Mc is shallow and boring. Who is the person he took over? What was their name? Did they have a family? A home? The mc is garbage without the demons powers and coupled with his cocky attitude smh. He's always rubbing it out ever chapter then get surprised when he gets caught up. I was looking forward to the green six double finned freak to throughly beat his ass. To bad he got saved. Oh well. It's not that bad if you can look pass for mc attitude.
SO YOU MEAN HE IS NOT GOING TO KILL HIS FATHER AND MASSACRE THE ENTIRE CLAN?? BORING! HUGO MAY HAVE BEEN MANIPULATED BUT HE DIDNT HAVE SOMEONE FORCEING HIM COMMIT THE MAAAANY CRIMES THAT HE DID. WHAT DO YOU MEAN HE BREED AN ARMY? HE MASS PRODUCED HIS OWN ARMY??? HE KNOCKED UP HOW MANY WOMEN SO THE CHILD COULD GO FIGHT IN HIS WAR?? HOW MANY OF HIS OWN CHILDREN DID HE SEND OUT TO DIE IN A WORLD. HE TREATED HIM LIKE A DAMN LAP DOG A FUCKING BLOOD HOUND AND HE JUST GOING TO LET HIM OFF EASY? BC WHAT? OH I HAVE A GRANDAUGHTER NOW? HIS DAUGHTER DIEING DID NOT JUSTIFY THE HORRORS HE COMMITTED! THE MC IS A DISAPPOINTMENT. OBVIOUSLY HIS REVENGE DIDNT MEAN MUCH IF HE LET HIM OFF BECAUSE "OH HES A CHANGED PERSON" WHO GIVES A FUCK? IF A BITCH TREATED ME DIRTY MY WHOLE LIFE AND ALL OF A SUDDEN THEY "CHANGED FOR THE BETTER" IT DONT MEAN SHIT! I STILL WOULD HATE THR BITCH BELIVE THAT! sorry for the rant I need sleep...
He's literally an asshole thats way too cocky for someone who don't know shit. Why is he broad casting his every action? Shouldn't he be wearing a mask because everyone 'supposedly' knows what he looks like? I don't understand why he don't use his stealth skill to leave and enter gates and don't get me started on the little boy.
Why is he trusting a little kid anyways after someone tried to literally stab him in the back? He's taking advantage of the boy anyways. He don't help the little boy level up and he took both of his questions which one he wasted. Why does he bring the boy with him to the dungeons anyways? He's putting a easy target on his back. Why did he tell the boy to get rid the news reporters like they would listen to a literal child????? And two times???? Just ordering him around for no reason. And how was the boy who was a level two able to get into the luncan dungeon that was for level five and up?
And why is the mc skill distribution so uneven like even that shit out. He have the points, it's so annoying when he leaves one state so low just to put it in another stat that's already high. They keep saying that they're going to kill the mc and take his skills but the mc killed multiple people and he has no new skills??? And how is the mc getting income? They said in the beginning that he had a part time job but????
The plot is good but the execution is trash. The little boy is going to stab him in the back one day. I'm calling it. Shit I hope he do for the why he treats him.
I'm also surprised the kid hasn't died yet, being recognized as MC's little helper and weak as he seemingly is.
The "change the future" thing is too overpowered at this point, his bonus points are endlessly rising for the smallest different act and it's kinda annoying.
If anything tho, the fact that he's so openly acting instead of hiding is an interesting course of action compared to the usual "sneaky sneaky" MC. I haven't seen an MC so openly mocking the others so far, so it's kinda refreshing.
I wish he wasn't such a killing machine tho. I get that enemies will stab you behind gour back and all, but damn it's no fun.
I don't like Osiris whatever his name is for rapping Set. Horus is going around like some little school girl with a crush and Set deserves every second of what's happening to him. Let's not forget all the stuff he's done. Everything magically don't count because he got rapped. Horus needs a guiding hand and Osirus is playing chess while everyone else is playing checkers.
Ngl I honestly used to ship tf out of them... but why is so obsessed with him? Like I'm getting so much second hand embarrassment from this :( I saw her becoming like this a mile away. Estelle really need to get her priorities straight. For her wanting to be a Castiello so much she sure doesn't act like one
Binge read this in two days btw.











This book is...something. The author tries so hard to demonize women and the only thing the women are doing is acting like a man xD. Trashy trash until the dude got bent over now im gooning 6/10