I can follow a story where a woman falls for her abuser. But he needs to have actually done something to earn it. This feels surface and shallow. Why would she go searching him out after all that. She should have taken 200 years to forgive him or else he should have sacrificed his life to turn back time... This is... Boring and completely unbelievable.
I am very confused. The translation is bad. Ban keeps using male pronouns for Lidi. The pages in chapter 4 seem to have been uploaded out of order. But I think the initial problem might have started with the plot. It's all over the place. Are we trying to discover a way to break a slave contact? Or are we being summoned to the capital? Or are we searching for clues about the girl? I just don't know what's happening.
I really hate ai translation is being used alot recently without someone proof reading this. But the one doing it might not even have English as one of their main language.
I think the main thing is mc is searching a way to dispel the slave contract but is getting denied the easy way to do it from people she knows who can help her with it. She suddenly wants to know more about the kingdom she once lived in because of unknown circumstances of finding her former lover in the slave market. She is invited to royal castle, probably related to her achievements in making potions but the king has a power to scan people abilities and maybe more and desires the mc as queen.
Im a bit confused what going on with the game heroine, she chose a different target? Is it the lion king? Or a different prince? Is the director a royal prince? Who killed the king? Is the 2nd prince ruling the other country?
The art is this story is glorious. Gorgeous. Top notch. 10/10... But the pacing isn't quite right. The story jumps back and forth in time which breaks the flow. There are a lot of unnecessary flashbacks. I feel like you could reshuffle all the flashbacks into the correct chronological order and make a more cohesive story. I suspect this is entirely the fault of the publication schedule and editorial requests, and not necessarily an artistic choice made by the author.
This is so ridiculous and funny. And those poor girls, all bickering over the hot guy club and little do they know, they aren't getting any of that.
I put off reading this one for a bit, but it's actually turning out to be really good.
I meant to like, I'm so sorry
No worries :)
My big fat finger betrayed me lol
The main character here is a recurring character in this mangaka's work I think. The fact that he never "gets the girl" is kind of a running joke. If this is the same guy I'm thinking of... I'll go check some of the other works by this writer...
Yeah, I think he's in Rumble Rush, and then a couple one shots.
Lol... This is pretty unbearably bad... not the noncon, that's whatevs, the story is just boring.
Cute art tho.
Most of these are boilerplate and boring, but this one kept me turning pages. The intrigue was excellent. 9/10.