Morohtar's Manga

Not the best display for mysophobic behavior in a serious sense.

I hope the writing isn't half-assed, tho it IS a smut story so chances are high enough.
It'd be nice to have a story with this mental problem again but the start of this story doesn't give me high hopes tbh. It's a very mish-mash display, like someone just read up on the disorder real quick and then went to writing the story. Because he's more of a clean freak with VERY few mysophobic MOMENTS rather than a full on mysophobia-ridden person. ^^;

I suspect the mental problem is only used as a 'fun gimmick' for the story and some scenes, which doesn't sit well with me tbh but for people who don't care or don't know the problem and how it really is irl this probably doesn't matter.
So, this is a case by case point that can make the story a normal read or maybe give minus points in ratings I suppose.

The art is decent, the base plot is interesting and the characters too, so I'm hoping for the story to actually NOT try displaying a mental problem correctly. Again, this IS smut tagged.

The translations are so-so. I can see some Google Translate bubbles here and there, clearly, so I'll probably wait for the officials.

The writing and the sudden scene skipping as well as the fact that there are MANY moments in which the author does not let emotions develope enough or settle in is very much hinting at this being a newcomer to comics.
The art too is sometimes randomly chibi-fied, which is supposed to indicate a lighter mood or funny moment but...that was NOT the appropriate choice at that moment.
It's not bad but not good either, but certainly a decent first attempt that can yield some experience for the creator on how to do things.

Now, the STORY, that aspect is incredibly interesting and I am inclined to go read the novel if there is one. Because I think it'll be a better read than the comic tbh. Both the MC and the ML are lovely in terms of personality and design and the overall plot is really intruiging BUT can be seen as rushed and boring at times because of the faults I first listed.

I like it and hope the author gathers more experience and creates better comics in their future too. Preferably stories like these, who's plot we have NOT seen a million times. X'D

It's a nice read, especially for less experienced readers, but even seasoned ones can enjoy it if they go into it with the newcomer aspect kept in mind. :)