I just want to read for a short while before starting my day and now I'm bawling my eyes out. Hikari screaming and calling for his mom and dad even though he never got the chance to call them that in the first place. And now they are old and Hikari is immortal...
Could have made a business from his power. Imagine weebs fucking their OCs/anime characters they want. If he can mentally "modify" how you look at the person, he can probably hypnotize you to see that sex doll or a consenting adult as Geto Suguru or something and bill them big bucks (it's me I'm the one who'll pay them) Just imagine the possibilities..
Anyway, great work! I enjoy it a lot. Smut is great too.
I think the reason for the lower rating is there is no tension between the leads. Like the seme is a cutie and the uke is sexy but together, I can't feel the chemistry. There are more tension between those two brothers lol. Still okay read, I like the translation and art.
woww what, this comment was so misleading. I’m so glad I still ended up reading this. You’re crazy if you think there was tension between the “brothers” nothing but trauma and emotional abuse.. and literal sexual assault. Crazy how that’s something you can say was “more tension” -.-
They did have tension, not in a good kind, but it's there. Not saying I shipped them. That's just how bland their relationship between the MCs are to me.
Also that's good, don't let others opinions about something be the reason for you not reading things.
It also hard to feel bad for OGHailey because she was STUPID af. Nothing is more dangerous than being powerful and THAT dumb. Dropping it, I wish the story focused in Maron Castle building instead of Hailey being "oh no I'm not the protagonist I can't change the plot" be so fr you being transmigrated is a whole lot of different plot already.
She was a bird tbh
did we read the same story bro what are u saying
Being used by MULTIPLE men and doing evil things for them is stupid in my vocabulary.
The definition of a bird
Bro if I'm reading yaoi, I don't want to read a straight subplot in it especially if it's about an adult man grooming a little girl (that almost became a rapist). The plot is already there why put some non sense. It's so tasteless when there's a good secondary couple already (first and second disciples)
It is not a little girl, it is a boy dressed up as a girl, if it changes anything.
No it doesn't change anything. Because the adult guy still flirted with the little "girl". He is waiting for 2 more years before his litte kid lover can be considered as an adult and take up customers.
IDK why the author needs to write ts up. It's like the yaoi I read when they had sex the second the ML's birthday arrived (literally fucking at 12:00am)
Agreed
it's a BOY???
SAME EXACTS THOUGHTS, WYM ITS A BOY IM CRINE
I was like, "what a weakass uke" in the beginning but he really is a great guy but stunt his growth period. I like the premise, the art is amazing too, but the seme? He doesn't have any redeeming qualities and I hope the ending is uke escape and get his own happy life (which I don't think will happen) Man, this story is just too sad. I like dark stories too but this is just not it so I'm dropping it.
If I already know my so called parents are trash and would treat me like that, best believe they'll be in my revenge list. I would snitch or steal their ledger tf. She went to hysterical outspoken villainess to doormat pushover.
Love the analogue about how there are different bread (love) in this world, that even if it's not a whirlpool mind blowing romance, that is love too.