I feel like the villian was right tho( Daniel). I wanted them to fall in love, but they just looked, say ,, hi'' , kissed, fucked , and boom - in love. It's missing some development instead of the sex scenes , to have maybe some cool back to back comparison, a memory of Matthew and some dialogue and then a talk with Diego on coffee or something, where they click on many things that Jayden and Matthew didnt or that made them very distinctly different! And from what it was shown, it's genuinely like as Daniel describes it. Its funny because I know for sure the author meant this moment to show us the reader that look, Daniel is manipulating Jayden etc. , but instead Daniel spoke facts and Jayden responses had no ground nor context to make sense.
Still a cute short story, if only it didnt happen like this
P.S. my personal IRL BL situation happen quite similar to them ,so maybe I shouldn't judge too much T_T
I specifically read the main story to see what in the world did Minho do , and all I saw is that he was a victim of a literal narcissist who acted like a victim, this story just confirms it. The whole,, she is a great author and he is wrong for critisizing her'' HOOOLYYY REACH PLEASSEEEEEEEEEE. The editor notes were everything to me. This is the literal biggest victim in all of manga's history. He was in atoxic relationship with a narcissist , ended up in another with a psychopath. AAAMAZING. The fact that all of this is because he was critiquing the work of the main character from the previous one is SO WILD TO ME.Like boohoooo. At least have some goddamn redemption arc for them , but nah, the author couldnt be bother. Minho is such a ,,horrible person'' and this is the best he deserves, apparently
I just read this too so I'm not sure, but the character of minho is based on her(the author)s abusive ex no? That's y she wanted him to suffer to the end. Just heard tho not sure, u may find more if u search, I thought tis was a cute story from the last chapter of ml asking mc if he could be his 4th important person, the lies on the internet, i swear
Mynho is the biggest victim I've ever read about in a manga EVER! What the actual is wrong with the author? How is Donna the victim IN ANY WAY? And how is he THE BAD GUY? Like legit ,was he an ex of the author or something? What has he done to deserve all of this??? And the fact that this continues with a whole side story based on abusing him even more is wild. Im just flabbergasted honestly, I love smut ,toxicity , all that, but not when the victim is treated like the bad guy, thats just fked
He was in fact based of a person the author personally knew. It was said that the OG Byun Minho was a senior in the college of the author. Twist ass sicko like what the hell. No wonder Byun Minho is one of the best well written characters in manhwa fiction. He existed in real life, because no way the author with her sloppy writing skills could write such a detailed person
He better ends up with mr. Nox! You can tell he is the only one who genuinely cares and loves him and gosh that was so stupid , but considering he is fighting his own demons, it makes sense. He doesnt want to be like the previous people who were in MC life. And its obvious its Arad who manipulated both, following in his father's footsteps. Gosh I pray for the good guy to win
Both MC were genuinely the villians in the story, obviously the little brother more, but both were. The guy that try to expose them was right and he is the one who suffered in the end for saying the truth lol (not defending his kidnapping, but before that ). The crush/exbf of the big brother was a genuine VICTIM. He was hypnotised raped , has no idea he was even a bottom( he was obv supposed to be and is a top lol), and his bf was cheating on him the whole time . And in the end he still apologised , always was nice and caring and legit suffered for no reason. Like the fact that the little brother got 0 concequences is wild to me. In the end, the conclusion is: If you are a hot gay guy with a big dih or an attractive twink, any sort of toxic behaviour is excused and those who are acting normally(think also the random friends) are portayed as the bad guys in the way of their ,,true '' love.











I really hope that Tae - young doesnt change. Like its always the same route of,, he found his true love and redeemed himself'' which kills so many plots. Just keep him as it is- obsessed and psychotic. Like he never truly falls in love like Jin-woo, but rather they stay together because Jin-woo is in love and he is obsessed, but never truly in love. It'd be a cool switch from the typical redemption arc, like not every plot needs it or benefits from it
What do you mean cos i very much need them to be obsessed and IN LOVE
Ehh it's not like Taeyong needs any sort of redemption or anything like that anyway because he hasn't done anything "wrong" yet, he's just a manwhore lmao. He hasn't hurt Jinwoo or treated him bad per se, quite the contrary. Of course for most of us is annoying that he sleeps with other people, but at the moment they're just fuck buddies.
To continue with my comment (pressed the wrong key). I think that falling in love or simply being obsessed with each other and stop seeing others would simply be their natural progression, you know?
Are you reading with your eyes closed?
He literally raped him tf you talking about he hasn’t done anything wrong yet.
He literally treats Jinwoo like a piece of shit too.
That's why I wrote wrong in quotation marks, I'm not saying that what he did was right, but Jinwoo (with bl manhwa's logic) didn't take it like that, he's just like "we had sex when I was drunk". Besides that, I don't think Taeyoung treats him like shit, Jinwoo already told him he hated that he left him money, he sleeps with others but they're just fuck buddies at the moment.