I hate that I like the premise so much when the execution for this has been absolute dogshit.
Despite only knowing MC as his past life self for a single chapter, I found him much cooler and more interesting than as he is now reborn. It was like his lack of power gave him a quality that's very sorely lacking in his OP self.
Say nothing about the plot, pacing and dialogue.
It has all elements you can think of that would go into a work like this, but instead of taking the time to slowly piece it all together like a well made puzzle, it's like the author slapped them forcefully in place while blind folded and had One Piece playing as background audio.
(And I love One Piece).
Idk why I'm being so critical I think it just got to me because I'm also a fan of the type of character MC wanted to become, and so maybe I had a little expectation going in. Ah well.
This story pisses me off lmao. He's too absolute in his "profiling." So many factors he reads as negative or as a personality disorder can just as easily be due to something more benign. Also, it's clear the author only did a cursory search into the mental illnesses they touched on.
Really giving "tell me they don't understand how depression works without telling me they don't understand how depression works."
Authors will really throw the word Genius onto anything. It feels like a meaningless buzzword at this point.
Damn, MC is a bit too relatable for me, aha. If you have needed to borrow a sizeable amount of money from a friend or family member, then you know how it can destroy the relationship as well as destroy your self-esteem in the process. It's oddly therapeutic to see him escape the dynamic and find a life for himself solely.
I think I will give the novel a try. While I don't normally like harems, the MC doesn't seem to be a raging pervert so. Which honestly, is the biggest reason why I hate the trope.
Hmmm maybe not...
According to a review on novel updates:
"Live stream comments done wrong. Think "The Darkness was Comfortable to me" type of comments. Just a wall of people commenting about the protagonists harem. There is a little bit of comments about actual plot progression, but the vast majority of it is meaningless jibber jabber."
That might get annoying fast.











Short chapters with little progression are the bane of my reader existence. Cries.
Its starting to get shorter. :(