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Finally, an original female lead that's such a joy to read. I love when there's female friendships in stories instead of the usual two-faced snake archetype.

Every time I read a translation like this I feel like I'm having a stroke. I don't mind MTL, but how hard is it to give a quick proofread?

I like the MC. I feel like the story could have done more with her character concept considering she was essentially a child soldier in her past life.

I actually don't mind that the Duke is (unwillingly) sharing his body with another soul. It's like she has two dads which I dig. Again, the execution of the idea is a bit poor. There's so much they could be doing with it but well instead *waves hand at story*

"Communication? What's that?" -These two apparently.

Dude's existence is enough to pull aggro. What is he a twelve year that got betrayed for the first time? What kind of nonsense is he spouting?? And the mage chick, "this dungeon is beneath me " Get out of here with that. The MC and his guildmaster boo seem to be the only likeable characters? bruh no, this sucks. I like the concept, and the MC's power is real cool. I hope the story improves from here.

Cale-nim

*sighs* Why does Alea have to be a girl... After literal years isolated, I think Helmut deserves to make friends before the author forces him into a romance.

I like this so far, but I do find it a bit unfortunate that it's already missing some small details that helped with the future character development.

In the novel, when the FL asked, the system stated that the author of the novel she has been given a second chance in had made a point of foreshadowing the character's futures with seemingly pointless inclusions in the descriptions. Such as the FL suddenly feeling ill and the described headaches and throes of dizziness as a hint towards her later terminal illness. The author hadn't wanted it to be "out of nowhere." which it seems is what this manhua is doing despite that.

In the novel for this adaptation, when the FL enters the classroom for the first time, she is suddenly dizzy and questions the system if that was due to her later diagnosis. (It is.) The reason she so obviously sniffs the ML (here) is that his scent which is slightly medicinal helped calm the aches and pain. Which leads to another detail that this adaptation has left out, why the ML smells medicinal. It may be mentioned later, so I won't going into too much detail, but he often takes vitamins for his insomnia. In the scene when she sits down at her desk for the first time, he wakes up and the first thing he does before even recognizing her is taking a few vitamins.

It's small details but by chapter 30 in the novel and the ML's back story is revealed, you realize why they were included.

Again, I just find it a bit unfortunate, but I will continue to read this as it's a cute story and definitely worth it.

The FL is endearing and steadfast. Someone that once she makes her decision on something is not wishy-washy in the least. It makes her a cool character to read.

Poor LeLe, something happens every chapter.

So pure

Admittedly, I did dislike how Seung was essentially forced into his feelings for Un, but this... The turn-around... This is making me so sad. Poor Un, he tried so hard to be considerate and even opened up his heart for Seung...

The first chapter featured an extra of them celebrating their anniversary, so I know this will all turn out okay. Still right now I'm just This story playing with my emotions like the foreign entities do with our characters.