I knew i was in the chapter 30 mark when the seme was JUST STARTING to self reflect that this has no hope for being a well written story. The plot so thin, you can't see her waist. Plot so thin, you'd know she's has an almond momager . Plot so thin, you'd think she's the before photo of hair without Minoxidil. Plot so thin she's called Heron Chic. Plot so thin its giving 2000s eating disorder. Anyways it was a read for the smut not for the plot. But the sex was off putting and the plot was never eating pudding. Plot so thin she's on the shinnylious menu lol.
DAMN, its been a hot minute since ive seen a light saber. I feel like korean yaoi especially has been going more the uncensored route. Guess they can't afford to pay the pp drawers lol.
Love when the seme is a yerning mess and the uke is aloof affff. I love their dynamic. The uke definitely has a case of the tism and is oblivious to how DOWN BAD HIS MAN IS FOR HIM..♡♡♡♡♡
Two brothers tragically lose their parents now its up to the older brothers to raise his sibling. Both brothers get magical power from their parents devices. The older brother get a harem of employers through his newly acquired translation skills. The brothers are a treasure trove of talents. As the story progresses we witness the Employers Thirsting over Him like He's Water in Their poorly run company desert lol. He get bombarded with employment offers to the point where GADWN DAMN. He's your ever loveable Marry Sue lol.
Its very enjoyable I highly recommend if your looking for low stakes cozy and wholesome story.
Like i feel like this shows parallel between real life harems too. Like if i wanted to read about a terrible father. Id read elon musk biography. Like lokey this is just the consequences of a man being a breeder but in fanstasy. Dropping it. I genuinely feel for his kids though like your father a hoe and a bum like broo
I mean, dropping it because of that is a bit iffy. The comic revolves around the children the hero left behind and how their coping with their life without their father around. The mc is, in the beginning, kind of like the hero but is changing slowly but surely interacting with his brothers and sisters. Like, the characters are fighting each other, but it's about getting to know their past and how they each dealt with their own suffering from having a father like that. Reducing the comic to that feels like you're narrow-minded. Just say you don't fuck with the characters or you find the comic boring. What you're describing is the start of the comic, but we're following the lives of many characters, not the heroes'. He's been dead.
Firstly stop projecting your head cannon on to me about why I dropped this peice of media. Second, I just get exhausted of seeing media, not give people and men in general enough flack for being mediocre or straight up negligent parents. Like kids are living beings and to have a kid and not show up for them long term and sustainablely is just bad parenting. If i started to assume things about you, like you did to me. I would say " so you think its okay for people to have kids and not be responsible in rasing them, so a thousand kids is okay as long as you have the money for it?" But i didn't, instead I say I have certain standards for what is considered good parents and realistically its really difficult to raise 12 kids and show up for them emotionally and socially. Like be so fucking for real right now and tell the the issues some of the characters are facing isn't because of developmental issues and negligent parenting. Like if the shadow of a bad father wasn't so prominent then why are so many of them exhibiting traits of emotionally stunted adults.
Was I excusing the hero for what he did? No, I'm just saying that the comic is more than the hero having many children. The point is to get hyped up with how the characters will fight and get to know more about them, learn more about the world and get attached to the characters you like. Emphasizing on only what the hero did is just weird to me because that's only the hook. Headcanon or not, we don't know what the next chapters will show, that's the point, to be eager what the mc and the side characters will do next or what they'll say next. They have problems, okay, let's see how they confront them. Will they keep sticking to their own motivation for the money or will they give it up for their sibiling? That's the point of these action comics, to make headcanons of what could happen next, then revise and make some new ones when more chapters come along.
Well if you weren't so " narrow minded" you would have left my vent post alone because you realised not everyone enjoys the same things. I did not like the hook. When your describing the point in reading this story like learning character motivations, hyped up about the future fights, and understanding the story setting and world building. Those points aren't unique to this story. That's how most people approach many stories. Why are you trying to teach someone to drink coffee, while they like tea in the justification of decorum and manners. If I wasn't caught on the hook and felt slighted for my time how is that a you issue. The " Emphasis" on the hero is because thats literally part of the world building and setting. Why are you cherry picking what elements of the story someone should and shouldn't focus on. Did I ask for you to work in my cherry orchard? This is why next time please keep to your internet business insted of being all up in my business.
well, tbh, i think its because media, mostly shows female characters being the primary victims, not that its a bad thing, it does show awareness, but there should also be just as much for male ones too, its not only a single gender issue, and even with that, its still a complex issue that has alot of nuances. Its an unfortunate stereotype, because of social media mostly; it just tends to reinforce an "us vs them" mentality at times. BUT, thats just my opinion from personal research; i could be inaccurate somewhere(〜 ̄△ ̄)〜. Uhm, main point, i think to fix the stereotype, we gotta rid of the mentality first(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
The story and the characters make it clear that he's a horrible deadbeat father and they trashtalk him all the time XD
They also literally show the horrible consequences of the hero siring all these children and then abandoning them and the women he got pregnant.
The hook of the story is so damn obvious that it's about the children and the effects of parental neglect.
Maybe don't judge a story when you barely know any of it.
"from personal research" then you should know deadbeat dad is matched with obsessive controlling emotionally abusive mom right? it's practically a staple in shoujo, with deadbeat dad for shonen titles
it's not a stereotype because of social media, it's a stereotype bc there was a basis in reality enough for media to pick up on and use as a plot device (or joke) without having anyone to explain it. the same with asians being good at math or being expected to be doctors, lawyers, etc.
media (or fiction) is just the vehicle by which the stereotypes are reinforced, there is no getting rid of the mentality without first matching reality.
from personal research" then you should know deadbeat dad is matched with obsessive controlling emotionally abusive mom right?
Yk to be honest, I've not been seeing much of the obsessive controlling emotionally abusive mom trope being done too often. Not saying it doesn't happen but I haven't been seeing them as.... plentiful as the dead beat dad trope
The notifs to this thread keep on appearing on my notifs section, and i'm saying this again:
The story makes it fucking clear that he's a horrible father. This story IS giving him flack for being a deadbeat and negligent parent. They practically spoonfeed this to readers.
Maybe stop projecting your our own headcanons about the story you barely know about?
You're complaining about how a story doesn't call out men for being negligent parents, when that's what this series has been doing the entire time. It's annoying as hell when people jump to conclusions.
Why is the bottom such a Delicious Tshundere Yummy Yum yum Cummy Cum cum lol. Like He's really like hit my G spot and Feed me a lot lol. The story ended with the bottom giving up his ass but we all know he has feeling too. Its obvious. Anyways it was a half complete story tbh but i enjoyed it lhehehhehhe











These story is finally bring back complex characters. Like you don't gotta like them. Also a lot of the hate this is getting I feel is frankly from not understanding the messages and themes of the story. Like how messy these characters are fleshes them out so well. Also I think this is story is an aquired taste as it has some tropes not everyone likes. And the people asking for perfect communication and for them to be " likeable" are the same people complaining everything is "slop".
Like the seme is a child sexually abuse victim and the uke was complicit. The uke is also a victim of child abuse and both of them have werid or negligent parents. So based on the story setting itself do you really expect a grounded and stable response to love? Like they are messy people dealing with a bunch of emotions they have no way of properly processing. Also the way these characters are written I love it. They feel like a reflection of so many of society flaws and how the impact an everyday person. Like with the rise of media illiteracy its telling why some commenters are pissed and hated this story for having beans in a bean soup recipe. If you get offended by my comments well ... i guess the clowns shoes and clown noses fits like a glove ♡♡♡