I know it’s short, so it was obvious it was gonna fall as short on something, but sometimes I really wonder if we’re just reading the same story over and over again just by different authors… It’s not bad (personally I’m not a fan of the “losing control” kinda sex and the monstrous builds of the characters’ bodies) but still… maybe I’m just tired of stories where the time characters spend with each other is so obviously just (haha) a mean to get to the sex bit. Also, short or not, it has a few kind of like plotholes, or things that just felt useless in the “long” run? Such as the lesson on traits, like, Taegyul (I’m not sure about the name srry) was sleeping like a log during that bit, so I suppose it was just a way to explain the whole thing to us readers, and I know some people might not know about omegaverse, but it felt, as I said, useless, or at least a missed chance to get Taegyul into the topic, so that later on he could make connections in his head (like when that dude stopped them) etc. Idk, again, short or not, I expected more of this author since their other work it’s really good. Like, what’s the point of writing about something you never wrote about, just for it to be like the average thing, without actually putting some sort of spin to it? Of course, they can do whatever they like however they want, it’s their work not mine, and it’s not like my word is the gospel or smth, I just felt like getting this out there more as a general consideration (I hope this makes sense, to me it does for now but since english is not my first language and I wrote this in one go I worry I didn’t make myself clear ~////~)
It was “spin on” not “spin to” ARGHHHHHHHH I had a 50/50 chance and I missed it
…I didn’t want to say this but it’s lowkey reminding me of Passion. Definitely not because of the toxicity, but rather bc of the randomness of their interactions. It feels like they act a certain way only because they’re MEANT to develop feelings for each other, but I don’t think the author has been doing it well. Idk if I’m making myself clear, but it’s like the reactions to certain actions don’t match the tone of said actions, which sometimes are even “ignored”? Not only that, certain conversations (not necessarily between the two of them) are weirdly over the top (I hope u understand I’m not saying there can’t be over the top stuff, I’m just confused as to why it is so prominent even in circumstances it doesn’t really fit in). Idk how else to say this for now it’s the first time I’m putting this into words. And again, pls don’t come at me, I just want to know if at least one other person has been getting the same vibes as me, and what’s your take on this in general! (btw I’m on ch 44)
I can see why you feel this way about the manhwa this is an adaptation of a novel and ngl this is a pretty good adaptation but there are some things in the novel which cannot be adapted in the manhwa, the novel develops their relationship really good and naturally in this aspect manhwa falls a bit behind cuz they cannot adapt all the narration and inner monologues in comic format (they kinda cut out a lot of romantic moments too tho) I love this manhwa regardless but I would recommend reading the novel it's better story and romance wise imo
When I first read this manhwa I actually felt the same as you but when I read the novel (from start) it was a whole different experience the art is really good but tbh manhwa don't do the novel justice imo and it feels like they're speed running the plot and cutting out a lot of scenes
I’ve also written this as a review, but I wanted to know what others thought of it I’m typing as I’ve just got to the half of the 60th chapter!
“Didn’t like Yoonseul’s jealousy arch AT ALL. At first it was nice and all, but making Jun completely oblivious of it didn’t sit right with me, as well as him (JUN!!!) being so dismissive and honestly extremely rude to Dongha. Like, I get it, he’s kinda annoying and you only have eyes for your bf, but c’mon, you’re better than this. He didn’t feel like the Jun we know from the first season/the beginning of the second one. To me it felt as if he’s become the mere object of jealousy of the other. I like obsessive semes don’t get me wrong, but I really didn’t like how it played out this time.”
Didn't even react to Ian's last line I was too mesmerized by Eunsan with his arms crossed above his head, he's so beautiful omg
I just got to ch 37 and is it just me or the panels are all over the place? I skipped to the next chapter to see if it would get better but the order was still a mess help ╥﹏╥ (also why did this have to happen during the best part ARGHHH)
There's actually a reupload with the official chapters. The chapters are fixed.
Ohhh that's right! Thank you
Ok I just checked and it's not quite like that unfortunately
Yeah, but the pages are still all shuffled up :(
I ended up reading the unofficial version, so it's all good!
Heyy does anybody know where I can read the novel in english? I can't seem to find the whole thing anywhere
I saw one in Wattpad but not sure if completed
https://booktoki468.com/novel/1954791?book=%EC%99%84%EA%B2%B0%EC%86%8C%EC%84%A4
You need to auto translate it because it's in korean :)
thanks :) I'll go check that one out
well, at least is completed thank you <3
*it's. Also, just to be sure, apparently there is no official english translation that covers the entire novel right?
Yeah there's none :)
kk thx
I'm sad to admit I didn't like this I've been praying for them to have sex but I just felt so fucking bad for Myung-il, especially after he said "don't ignore me" (also it was not satisfying imo)
He is saying dont bite, the translation is inaccurate.
It’s just… the whole reason why D approached J in the first place almost NEVER comes up, and if so it’s just to say “maybe I like him regardless” even though we literally never see (besides that notebook scene in which D wonders about J’s past) D taking notes and actually incorporating what he’s been finding out in his story, so I must say I’m not really thrilled to get to the “I thought you liked me!!” bit, ‘cause to me it’s not really going to make sense. Also the “I wanna do this” and the following “you’re so stubborn” kinda conversations between the two have started to get really boring, mainly because they’re so long and repetitive. I’m more than willing to admit that I haven’t read any further and therefore I’m sure that I’m missing the more plot heavy part of it, it’s just what I’ve been thinking so far :D it’s just that a would like a story that’s a bit more balanced from the start, so that I don’t have to “get through the boring/too smutty/rough around the edges/whatever” part to get to the more interesting and/or better written part. Overall to me this is a 6.5/10 for now
I’m on ch 35 btw!! Have to read the 36th
I’m pretty sure the entire reason mc did approach ml was for inspiration for his novel..
Yes, but my point was more about how it doesn’t really get past its “pretext phase”. As in, we know that’s the reason why mc did it, but does said reason ever, consistently have a tangible impact on the development of the story? Aside from the point where ml is gonna find out about it, not really. To me it’s more of a “told not shown” part of the story