After doing something so dumbass as to go speaking with him without precautions she could have threatened him to have him killed in pieces to forcefully retrieve the glass container if he did not give it back. Aside from that, at this point, she should be honest with the dad, lay her cards on the table and find the most efficient solution together. I can understand some necessary narrative-driving choices in the construction of the plot, but this is straight-out bothersome for the readers. What's whit an op main character who acts dumb by ignoring logic possible choices (against her own interests)? This makes the whole story less engaging and compelling to read. You want a protagonist to make the most of her resources, she wasn't portraited as someone with poor judgement till now
I know we don't really care about the plan, except for its end result, but what's with the translation?
Of course you don't like him saying he doesn't care about you enough to go with you, but hurting him is a no no. You're aware of your strength on him by now, you know better
What kind of plot and characters should I expect? Generically, no spoilers please
Honestly? I have no idea what to tell you. I was expecting cliche story with going back in time but have no idea what is happening right now lol A lot of surprises. Almost everyone started to go insane but truth be told main couple love each other deeply. No smut as of now. I just finished it in one go and I must say it's quite entertaining
That sounds interesting, thanks (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
it’s a game world story and honestly my advice us to just keep reading. ur gonna be hella confused at the start and have trust issues with a lot of characters but the dots will connect at the end of season 1
I was invested in the story, WHEN around Chapter 60-64 the ml trespassed, kidnapped the mc, got violent, started to gaslight and sexually harrass him. He's probably gonna rape him, sooner than later. I didn't see that coming... I MEAN, it was clear he was a psyco/violent, but I hoped things would develop more organically among the main characters.
I just binged this in a few days and I honestly thought we were going somewhere slowly until he showed up at his apartment... Art is pretty and I actually liked ML despite his complete lack of empathy. I thought it was interesting / funny until he blackmailed him... It went downhill fast!
I feel robbed of the slow organic developement I expected too!
I agree with your points ┗( T﹏T )┛
Thanks for the translation, however I'd suggest some proofreading and rephrasing.
The impression while reading 'till chapter 7 and 8 was to be reading a faulty machine translated text.
Some phrases that struck me as weird in ch8: "The house invited me in" instead of a more logical "I was invited in the house".
The ml saying "don't clean it", when he was clearly saying "don't hide it" (referring to the bulging during the sex scene ...what was there to clean in that moment?). Or, finally, the poorly formulated second conditional structure: he said smthg like "If I knew this, I do that" instead of "If I knew this, I would have done that".
English in not even my first language btw.
I usually don't critique translations this way, I know we are in a place, reading from this site, where beggars can't be choosers; but in this case the mistakes were so relevant to repeatedly distract me from the narrative, and ultimately stop me from reading in the earlier chapters, which is a pity.
I made my point, thank you for reading till here, I don't know why you did, you must be into English grammar ahah Have a good day
Did someone get this plan concerning Franz plotted by Judith and can shortly explain it?
so judi knows franz needed to kiss some royal ass in order to battle against rudi right? and since rudi allied to crown princess candidate, judi knows the only option is prince samuel, the other crown prince candidate. in order to gain the prince's trust, franz is buying his way thru using bribes. now, judi predicted franz's next step, and asked prince samuel in advance to act like cooperating to franz's bribery by asking exorbitant amount of bribes. now, franzy is not rich, so he would have to find a way where to get this bribe right? judi is betting that once pressured to provide more, Franz would have no choice but to touch winterwald money by stealing. which she had planned to have rudi catch franz red handed to put him behind bars finally. but she failed tp share this plan to rudi, so rudybaby made plans on his own, which is sending assassin to deal with franz's ass but failed. now judiloves plan has gone awry cos they dont know where he is and he would be mode vigilant now. so now she had a new plan, which is to use rudy hidden passage to lure franz into possibly using it himself and getting him imprisoned for violating grandpapi's law.
personally, i think sending a bunch of poison ang assassin go franz is better than round about plans only to get him arrested. likd the dead cant harm u soo
I see now~ yeah Rudi was more practical ahaha
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