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After doing something so dumbass as to go speaking with him without precautions she could have threatened him to have him killed in pieces to forcefully retrieve the glass container if he did not give it back. Aside from that, at this point, she should be honest with the dad, lay her cards on the table and find the most efficient solution together. I can understand some necessary narrative-driving choices in the construction of the plot, but this is straight-out bothersome for the readers. What's whit an op main character who acts dumb by ignoring logic possible choices (against her own interests)? This makes the whole story less engaging and compelling to read. You want a protagonist to make the most of her resources, she wasn't portraited as someone with poor judgement till now
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I was browsing through Josei plots when I run into something unsavoury. I would like to bring to the attention of the site admins the threatening chain letters spreading in the comments section of "The Sexy Alien Next Door". I don't believe in them and I don't spread them, but it's still quite unpleasant to see. I'm not sure were to signal it on the site, so I'm posting it here
I'm looking for a yaoi or shounen ai.I couldn't read it all, but I'd really like to.
This is the beginning of the story:
Two guys (A and B) move to live together becuase they're in love with each other since middle school. Here one of them (A: long hair, glasses) goes to the public bath, full of old men except for a guy he makes friends with(C: short, dark hair. Hella muscolar lol). Meanwhile the boyfriend(B:pouty, brown hair) goes to school and meets the same guy(C), which is the group leader od the club. During the first trip with the club B falls in the sea while fishing ...
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Did someone get this plan concerning Franz plotted by Judith and can shortly explain it?
so judi knows franz needed to kiss some royal ass in order to battle against rudi right? and since rudi allied to crown princess candidate, judi knows the only option is prince samuel, the other crown prince candidate. in order to gain the prince's trust, franz is buying his way thru using bribes. now, judi predicted franz's next step, and asked prince samuel in advance to act like cooperating to franz's bribery by asking exorbitant amount of bribes. now, franzy is not rich, so he would have to find a way where to get this bribe right? judi is betting that once pressured to provide more, Franz would have no choice but to touch winterwald money by stealing. which she had planned to have rudi catch franz red handed to put him behind bars finally. but she failed tp share this plan to rudi, so rudybaby made plans on his own, which is sending assassin to deal with franz's ass but failed. now judiloves plan has gone awry cos they dont know where he is and he would be mode vigilant now. so now she had a new plan, which is to use rudy hidden passage to lure franz into possibly using it himself and getting him imprisoned for violating grandpapi's law.
personally, i think sending a bunch of poison ang assassin go franz is better than round about plans only to get him arrested. likd the dead cant harm u soo
I see now~ yeah Rudi was more practical ahaha
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