Read up to ch 79(included) and tbh so much plots were not concluded(maybe to concluded in another story). The roomate with white hair and kihoon, that was not concluded and to have Kihoon have feelings for the mc after that...It feels like he never gaf about the white hair guy, I mean in some ch the white hair guy says Im dating now and its implied to be kihoon, even tho they are not dating it seemed that the white hair guy would be forgiving him soon. But since kihoon got feelings for the mc in the mean time....Do you understand how it feels? Also, that whole plot is bad, why the hell would kihoon talk to the white hair guys parents or wtv to know abt the white hair guys mom and in a hotel?! Hes just a random guy! And no family would tell a random guy shit. And why doesnt kihoon just say "I wasnt fucking your sister, I had a meeting with blablabla" then relay the information he got and say sorry for dtepping out of bounds. THEY LIVE TOGETHER!! Plenty of time to talk, its a plot whole that they still didnt have that convo. Also kihoon is hotter the ml and less annoying.
Another topic, the ml was too possessive and the story suffered from it ( I LOOOOVE POSSESSIVE MLS BTW). This stlry in specific suffered from it bc of the premise, a guy goes to live in a shared house after having a messy break up with his ex. The house if full of excentric characters and the guy has a jinx. The jinx and needing to fix with love?ok i get that. But it forgot one thing, excentric roomates! Normally in this stories, the mc is supposed to make close friendships with the roomates and grow with them. And the author wants us to think they are close but i barely saw interactions with them, the mc was just whinning and then some other things outside of the roomates happened. And the the mc going to live with the ml so soon... the ml living in the same house was also a bad choice.
The villain was a bit of a real human and a bit cartonish evil. He was a real human in the sense that grew up priveliged and abused his power in a very violent way but then made no sense. The mc disappeared and went to the military, he didnt try and look for him after 2 years, someone tells you to go drink with the mc and he goes running (ok maybe its plausible). But then they try to frame his obsession and violence bc the mc never seemed like he loved him all that much, to his character it makes no sense. And tbh the villain is a bit dragged out, hes gonna do this, doesnt get what he wants, goes do that, doesnt get what he wants.
Alzo if I were mcs brother i would be sooooo pissed!!!
The official translations are so muvh better! You will understand their feelings so much more
Ahahahaha peopke dont even have memories of being 2 years old and the ml is liking the mc since that age...Also wth did the parent think of that???
1st it might not be a twin(the eye shape...idk if it was that similar) and second, ok he has a twin, doesnt mean they are switching out on our mc(that can be the plot,but i can also not be).
Ahahahah zthe "leftovers" students were a chinese guy and a fat black girl the black girl introduces herself with " i love k-pop" and the chinese guy with "Im chinese", peak writing.
I was dying of laughter when I read that panel
Our mc is very attentive and caring. The relationship started ina abrupt way but he did not enter in a passive mode when hes all like "I cant believe were together, i cant get used to touch" or maybe "I cant believe Im gay", stuff like that where the uke is totally passive in the relationship until he has a revalation. He initiates sex, seems to like Ho-su, makes demands, concieds to demands, such a breath of fresh hair.
I know it’s a typo, but it truly is a “breath of fresh hair”
Hey a breath of fresh hair is also nice
Me when i smell my lover after they take a bath or something
The story is trying to play a lighter tone with all this (starting eith the brothers bickering, the conversation being in a coffee shop, them eating sweets, threatning to beat the brother if he crosses the line, etc...) but its impossible for the story to do it. Lets start with even before the rape scene, when mc was with the brother he felt bad and insecure. Then the scene happened and altough it was no gruosome or violent, it was unsettling and quite disgusting. The brother was having a crazy(and disgusting) sex talk that the ml would never say and the mc was feeling something was amiss. The tone waa serious, it was serious in that scene and before that (serious abt the brother and how he was creating bad feelings in the mc, otherwise the story was lighthearted). But then the mc has that scene after the rape and the tone is off, the only thing mc shows is anger, no disgust, fear, shock even. After the mc knows the story he doesnt even have alittle bit of ressentment for the ml bc the ml knows he has a crazy brother bt didnt tell the mc anything(wich is ok in my eyes for various reasons btw), or ressentment for being dragged in a stupid childish obssesion. We have NO time with mc and his thoughts! Then he goes crying to ml (that scene was ok, it was ok and real for the mc to say what he said, and yes ik he was raped), then they have the sex wich...Its a bl, sometings are bound to happen... But then this scene comes in...Badly written and too soon!!! Once again we need time with the mc, let us see his normal daily life and see his thoughts abt all this after he is calm. Let us hear that he carries anger, disgust and ressentment for the brother BUT that hes an orfain and has no family. That he wishes ardently for a family, and even tho the mls brother has raped him, he doesnt want the ml to be without a family. And since the ml also relies on the family for money, the mc doesnt want the ml to end in the same situation as him financly. But since he was raped, ihe doesnt want to see the twin ever again. And after we see all that, go the the scene where its the 3 of them and then let them talk, the mc doesnt have to make that big of a discourse but I think he should say at least 3 points:
(to ml): 1. He doesnt know how painful it is to have NO family whatsoever. 2, he relies on the family fir money so he cant do everything he pleases
(To tein): 3. Never show you fucking fave in front of me whatsoever.
Basically im saying the idea of the ml and ONLY the ml to not cut the twin off is good. The tendion of this would be better also cause uuuu will the twin show up again or something.
Also ml should feel GREAT guilt and im not seeing it, and the ml would have GREAT anger for the twin (real anger, not bickering), so the tension would be better.
If the author really wanted this tone it should have ronanticized the shit out of the twin and that rape scene, like many bls do(not saying I wanted this), but that was not done and the twin only brought bad feelings.
yea i agree it was totally off i don’t understand why the author even included the twin brother part if it was just gonna be moved past so easily with barely any anger from the mc? it makes no sense