why do you care?? just saying you can drop the story and move on to whatever story is fast pace for you so you can be so happy that the story ended fast. plus I'm guessing you never been loved by your sibling in my case its normal siblings who work together and get along together are the best duo for me. its better then abusing each other.
It's a good story but has a few flaws? It's not something concerning enough to give up on, and because they're valid questions at this point. We're allowed to have opinions and this want even enough to get annoyed at. I know I want to know the answer to some of them too. I am getting a little lost myself. I would also like to add one, which I'll do in response to op.
7. If Sidis like her so much, why didn't he try to get in touch with her at all.
8. Do you live Sidis, or do you despise him because both is Hella confusing!
Except most of them are not valid. 1. Who cares if they're all ash white? 2. The direction of the story is clear to me especially if you read the beginning chapters and what happened in the previous timeline. 3. So if the pacing was any faster the plot actuallp
y IS going to be lost, especially from the OP's perspective. 4. Same reason as 2. 5. The only reason there is really any concern about him falling in love with the FL is her cruelty not that she's lacking something that doesn't really mean she's lacking. 6. Same as 2.....
Oh, I didn't mean to imply that I agreed with everything op said. I don't care about things like skin color the majority of the time, my questions were really what I was most concerned about. My main point was that op is entitled to an opinion. The whole point to there being a comment section is to voice that opinion. Saying "who cares?" just belittles people when there is a space for them to point out that /THEY/ care. The person replying doesn't truly mean "who cares" they're saying "I think your opinion is stupid and have decided then that you shouldn't be allowed to have one" and that was what I was taking issue with. I added my own to op's list because I was trying to make it obvious that /I/ care.
So whether you, they, or anyone else thinks the opinions are valid or not, op is allowed to have them, and is allowed to voice them. I actually really like this story for the most part, I just feel like it's taking forever to really get anywhere right now, and I'm feeling a little empty in regards to the romance. She is lacking though, she herself even believes so. It's not a flaw in the writing, but in her personality.
And perhaps I should reread to better understand, but it would be my third read-throughand I think it would be better if I did a reread later in the story because I'd just have to wait again. Maybe it's a problem with officials? The waiting then reading week by week while reading other stuff, some of the details get lost.
1 why are they ash white
2 what really is the direction of the story
3 the pace is so slow, too much yapping too
4 ivorre make up your mind on what kind of person you want to be, it’s been 68 chapters. you’re ultimate goal and resolve is long overdue
5 i can’t take sidis’ feelings so seriously bc idk how he fell in love with such a person in both timelines. i wish the story would pick up the pace and show us his pov
6 the siblings are too much into each other’s skins it’s almost concerning
that’s it i can’t think if anything to point out anymore good night